More intelligent computers is good or not!?

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Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it a positive development while others think it is negative development. Discuss both points and give your own opinion.

In modern world computers play an important role in every aspect on human’s life. They make life easier and more productive. We can create beautiful things with computer like wallpapers, posters, etc. Scientifics also take advantage of this creation. They can meet their partner in some special research field in all over the world. But what if a computer crashed during an important operation? Humans reliance on computers make them unable to do jobs when there is no computer.

With computers we can do huge amounts of works in a short time and with high accuracy. A company can do their financial jobs with some special software that would take a month or two to be done with human employee. Whether broadcasts create animations for viewer which make them understand what’s going on in their country. A doctor who is unable to find a disease’s reason, or unable to find its medicine can do an internet search or can email someone for help. Finding a book and reading some of its pages are not hard or time consuming with computers.

But computers like any other human inventions have some disadvantages. Computers make humans to rely on them. More reliance on computer, make us unable to do jobs when they are absent for some reasons. When a computer crashed unimaginable cost it can cause. Computer crashes during an operation in hospital, or in airport can even take some people’s life. If computers become more intelligence and claim independence from humans, or want to govern earth alone –like what we see in some science fiction movies- then earth become a little small for two kings to take control.

I think computers advantages wins against its disadvantages and more intelligence computers will help us more. I prefer to do my jobs with someone who is more intelligence than me. They can help me understand what I have to do. So in this way computers can help me in great deal. They never become tired with my huge amount of questions. Computers are available 24/7, so you can account on their help any time needs arise. Then I can do my job more beautifully because I and all humans have great thing that computers haven’t and that is sense of creation.

Computer’s intelligence plus human’s creation power can make our world more beautiful and more powerful. Advanced society brings science and culture. This can be done with the help of computers. And of course more intelligence computers help more. Their accuracy will be higher. Their speed will save our time. Their intelligence can offer some ways which can trigger our mind to find better solutions.

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