 #2 (permalink) Sun Jan 23, 2011 8:35 am Re: Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable info |
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Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
I agree that all of the valuable information available on the internet has helped people in ways that no one could ever have imagined even just a couple of years ago. From the internet, people can get allot A LOT of information in a short period of time.
To begin with, internet is a global network that allows people to access different sources of information. People can access to internet and they can get a wide range of information. Today, because of the internet existence thousands of people continue their education online. For example, as a student, I need to have accesses to educational resources(,) and the internet gives me the possibility to find this information quickly. It is waste of time for me running to the library and searching to find FOR books that I need for my research, while all this information can be available online at any time that I would love to read, or study.
Access to the internet provides us not only with a wide variety of information, but also it helps us with our daily necessary needs. Today, there are thousands of websites that provide people with information not only for educational purposes, but also for practical use such as daily traffic, weather and news reports. Using websites to find answers to many questions that people have about health, sports, hobbies, art, cooking, fixing a car, etc. are available at a click of a mouse.
To sum it up, I believe that the internet has helped people in unlimited ways, and the information that people get now is extremely efficient and helpful. Besides the advantages(,) there are many disadvantages that access to so much information creates IN THE USAGE OF THIS MULTIMEDIA, LIKE EXCESS OF INFORMATION THAT MAY CREATE VARIOUS problems, but this can be eliminated(,) if people know how to use the internet in a proper way.
Dear professor, members of this English forum,
I'm sorry to hear that professor Kitos was sick and I hope he will recover soon.
May another professor grade my essay? I have to take TOEFL very soon and my school requires me to get 100 points in order to be accepted. I highly appreciate the help that this forum is giving to me.
I'm looking forward to hear from you and thank you very much for your time and attention.
Vilma
VILMA, I'M NOT A PROFESSOR, BUT I THINK THAT A VIEW OF OTHER STUDENT MAY BE ALSO INTERESTING TO YOU. SOMETIMES IT IS NOT EASY TO SEE OUR OWN MISTAKES. YOUR WORK IS GOOD, BUT PRESENT AT LEAST 3 REASONS TO SUPPORT YOUR IDEA. YOU MENTIONED ONLY 2.
GOOD LUCK!
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