 #2 (permalink) Sun Jan 23, 2011 21:12 pm Re: if you first don't succeed try try again"means to continue working towar |
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| Anil Kumar Yadav wrote: |
The saying "if you first don't succeed try try again"means to continue working towards a goal in spite of difficulties.
Do you agree or disagree with above statement?
I'm agree with the aboveMENTIONED statement that until you don't succeed you should try try again.
After doing master's in Biotechnology, I was excited up for coming future. I was interested/WANTED to work in R&d department of pharmaceutical(,) because I have keen interest in researchING OR discoverING something new.
I gave my first interview in a reputed pharmaceutical COMPANY, but(,) unfortunately(,) I was not selected. I was BOTH disappointed(,) because I worked hard for the preparation of THE interview(,) AND A little bit happy(,) because its was my first interview & AND I was satisfied with my preparations.
One months after my second interview was in Ranbaxy-well renown pharma company (NOT CLEAR WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY),I was exCited(,) but nervous too. I cleared FOR THIS JOB IN 3 stages of THE interview(,) but FAILED out in last 4th stage.I was deeply depressed & worried about my career. After this interview, I was DID not facing GO TO any interviews(,) because I lost my confidence. In AT that THOSE bad timeS, my dad helpED me to boost up my confidence.He told me the story of spider(,) who tried(,) tried and tried until she reached to the roof.
I learnt a lesson from this story that we should try until we didn't achieve the final destination. I was ready to face/ENCOUNTER interviews. Before my interviews,I check my weakness of previous interviews(,) and worKED hard on to improve them .
Again, I gave the interview in Ranbaxy(,) and that time I was full of confidence and this time I was selected. I got my dream job.
So in THE conclusion ,I want to say that if you try for something with hard work,in starting you may not achieve success,but try try again , one day you will definitely taste/ENJOY A success. Until you do not get the A success(,) you should try(,) try and try.
please evaluate my essay.
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