why do many people visit museums when they travel to new place???

[Qhuong90]

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Many people visit museums when they travel to new place because they do not want to be surprised at unique and strange culture in that place as well as to be aware of history and what create the life style of people there as much as possible.

First of all, museum is the place where tourists can discover most of the information about the place’s history and customs. With a limited time in their journey, tourists cannot visit all of the destination in that new place. In that case, a museum can show them a general understanding about the place where it is located, such as who set up the village, why the village has its name… Tourists can find it easy to get the information about the process of establishment and development of that place, be familiar with costumes of the native people and respect religious and belief of the local people which can be strange to them.

Second, instead of seeing a movie in the theater or going to a park to enjoy the nature, tourists consider museums the best attractions where they not only can take a picture but also watch the performances staged by local people themselves which convey a deeper knowledge about a place for the strangers. These will become a meaningful gift and an unforgettable experience for tourists when they leave. Moreover, a museum is also a representative of a place whose architecture prove the long history and the prominent of a place. What a pity for the tourists when they own pictures of all the beautiful sites except of a local museum.

In conclusion, museum is a bridge between tourists and the place they travel to. I believe that people who do not visit a museum in their journey do not actually travel to that place.

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between two university students who met on campus

[Elsiefan]

[Qhuong90]

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Can you explain my sentence "Moreover, a museum is also a representative of a place, whose in which architecture prove(s) the long history and the prominent of a place" ? i'm confused why we write whose in which

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[Elsiefan]