#2 (permalink) Wed Jan 26, 2011 12:11 pm Re: The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual. |
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The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual. Do you agree or disagree?
Can you please review my essay? Many thanks for your help :)
Environmental issue is a fundamental one in the highly developing world we live in. I am confident that only group actions can contribute to preserving the Earth's beauty and its inhabitants' desire of fresh air, clean water and picturesque countrysides. Environmental problems are rapidly growing in strenghtstrength, thus they are too complex for the individual to handle.
To begin with, one of the most substancial substantial environmental endangers is pollution. Carbon dioxide is realised released to the atmosphere in the process of burning fosil fuels. Following that, terrifying in numbers presence of vehicles on the roads results in the air contamination. It is certain that one car powered by solar energy will not make any difference. The individual can not stop or even reduce the dramatic process of environmental destruction.
Secondly, the environmental issue has reached its peak and rose to the worldwide range. Even if the person managed to rescue the whole town, environmental problem would not be vanished from the globe.
Lastly, the individual does not posses an adequate power to imply ecologically friendly behaviours behaviors on the world's population. It is a mission for all countries governments to promote a battle against the residents' ignorance. The single person not only can solely encourage but also show an excellent example(;) nevertheless he is not capable of handling the environmental issues on his own.
To sum up, I firmly believe that the individual's attempts to resolve the environmental issues are futile. A joint effort is required in order to make planet Earth cleaner, healthier and happier place to live.
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====================================================== Well done, Beefik. A little bit of spelling mistakes, but the general organization is clear. I think it will be better to develop the main body if you have enough time in writing, thus your ideas will become more convincing.(*^__^*) |
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