which way of life is better for future generations, yours or your parent's?- help

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Each generation has its own characteristics in many aspects. The values, the music and the fashion trends, among many other things, change from time to time. Consequently, the way of life of each generation is unique and changes from father to son. So, it is difficult to predict what way of life could satisfy future generations and whether it would be more similar to mine or my parents'.
Comparing my parents’ customs with mine, it is possible to see many fundamental differences. From my point of view, it is more likely that future generations will be more satisfied with my way of life mainly because they will be even more spoiled by technology than me.
On the one hand, my parents are not so stressed in their routine. When they were children they were able to play on the streets, without being afraid of the city violence. Besides, my mother had more time at home to raise and enjoy her daughter.
On the other hand, I have always had access to more leisure options than they had. For instance, as a child, I could go to cinema and modern amusement parks frequently as well as play many different types of video games. Moreover, I could enjoy much freedom and independence in my young life than my parents could. During all my life, I had the opportunity to travel a lot and to live abroad, while still being in contact with my family and friends everyday through the internet.
Finally, my generation already takes for granted this kind of technology and liberty, thus I cannot imagine the future one living without them. All in all, I firmly believe it would be more satisfied with my way of life than my parents’.

TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture from a social studies class

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