It is better to use your Knowledge and experience to solve prob. than asking othe

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There are some questions on the table whether using your own knowledge and experience to solve problems or asking other people for advice is better. I personally agree with the statement and I think it is better to use your knowledge and experience to solve problems. There are two major reasons.

To begin with, you are the one who is responsible for your life. No one can sway your life, and no one will permanently be by your side. As the society is becoming egoistic, everyone only think about themselves and their benefits. If something is not directly related to them, they ignore it. At first, using your own experience and knowledge to solve problem may turn out to be failure but as time goes by and you are accustomed to solving problem by yourselves, then you can easily solve your issues by using your knowledge and experience. For example, when I was studying abroad in America without my family, I had to figured what I courses I should take for my dream. I asked for an advice from my friends and some teachers but they made the excuse to avoid giving me an advice, so I chose the classes by myself which I thought to be good for my future job. And the classes I chose to take were tuned out to be necessary courses for my major. After, this experience, I realized I am only responsible for my life and I can solve every problems occurring to me by myself.

In addition, advice from others can be wrong. Like it was mentioned above, the society is becoming egoistic and people do not care about other people. If they are asked to give an advice to you, it is possible that they do not think seriously and give you an advice reluctantly. In this case, listening an advice from other people who do not care about the consequence of their advice may make the problem even worse. For instance, my uncle needed money to pay his tuition and he asked his friend what he should do. With his friend’s advice, my uncle borrowed money from the private money lender so he could pay the tuition. But the interest of his debt was really expensive so he had to pay for his debts over 7 years after he got the job. In this sense, solving problem with your own knowledge and experience is better.

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