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Advertisement influences people's behaviour in a negative way
Do you agree or disagree?
We are living in a fast changing world where there are various products.Companies use advertisement in order to sell their goods fast and easily.Nevertheless, some advertisements effect on people's attitude to their products in negative way. On the other hand, some advertisement influences people's attitude towards in positive way. In brief, advertisements have two sides like money.One part of which gives good notion about products, the other side shows bad ideas about goods. To better understand how advertisements influence people's behaviour in a positive way, we need to look over more closely. NOT SUCCESSFUL INTRODUCTION!
First of all, the most significiant reason is that advertisements cause to buy new goods.
There are many goods in the world at the same specification. They have same qualities and price.If we do survey about same quality and prices product , one of which know by advertisements , other does not have any advertisement in media. SENTENCE IS NOT CORRECT AND CLEAR! If we ask people which one you will prefer to buy, majority of people will definitely say that I prefer to buy well-known companies's products. To give an example, we compare international big company's goods and rural company's goods. Needless to say, big companies allocate a big deal of money for advertisements.Kraft company is a very huge company in the world,on the other hand, Ulker company is a big company in Turkey,however BUT Ulker does IS not knowN in the world. When PEOPLE you see two of them product ENCOUNTER THEIR PRODUCTS, MOST OF THEM prefer to obtain Kraft company's products.
Secondly, some companies donate money for charities. Therefore, they could increase their income. Companies contribute to some charities such as Chest Cancer Research and WWF. They could add their signature inside their product. Thus, many people prefer to buy these company's products. To give an example, Nestle Company give a money for Chest Cancer Research, they add purple layer in order to increase awareness of cancer's reasearch.
All in all, advertisement have HAS a positive affect EFFECT ON people's attitude because of the increasing awareness of community and showing quality of goods. The more company make advertisement in media, the more they increase their income and awareness of people in common problems in THE world.
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Advertising
Advertisements, one of the symbols of the modern society, are prevailing in every part of the world. Widespread and influential, advertisements are capable of convincing people to purchase commodities that they do not need. Among various factors that contribute to the phenomenon is the temptation of seeming lower price, the influence of celebrities and, in some cases, the exaggerated functions of the products.
The foremost reason for the phenomenon is that hardly anyone is able to resistant to the tempting low price, which is a trick played by the sly and shrewd merchants. For example, there are always so many products on sale that few of us are able to be sensible and rational enough not to be lured by the huge price tags with "sale" on them. As a matter of fact, the buyers are hooked by the seeming discount. By frenetic and irrational shopping, people would stock up piles of items that they actually will not be in need of in the foreseeable future or even for the rest of their lives.
Another subtle explanation rests on the fact that celebrities, who have been paid a considerable sum of money, play an important role in the effect of advertisements. Some famous stars are so influential that companies focus their attention on them and make the best use of their fame. As a result, a group of loyal fans would rush into stores and go into rapture if they are fortunate enough to possess one. Consequently, both the stars and the sellers benefit from the commercial game, regardless of what the consumers obtained.
The third convincing reason I would like to mention is that the exaggeration made in the advertisements by the merchants is also deceitful. It is, undoubtedly, confusing and puzzling for ordinary consumers to distinguish the unqualified ones from millions of products presented in front of them. In addition, a majority part of the merchants, some of whom are inadequate and inferior, are in the disguise of appealing appearances. Consequently, if is of no wonder that consumers would buy products preached to be perfect, a considerable number of them are nothing but a waste of money. Naturally, it is probably too reckless to maintain that advertising is a matter of cheating since some accompanying merits also come along with it, such as the aesthetic values.
However, the minor advantages will never prevent us from concluding that advertisements attract consumers to purchase useless products, because of their so called discount, the effect of celebrities and the boastful description. |
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