The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong.

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Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong.

There is a popular belief that decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. However, from my experience, I have found many real-life examples that lead me to a disagreement with such a belief. My detailed explanations are as follows.

First of all, because of well preparation, scores of decisions can be made rapidly and accurately. In reality, the fear of making wrong decision, the main cause of wasting much time, comes from the poor preparation that is the lack of information, skills and experience. However, if a person is well prepared to face his/her problems, he/she is able to decide the best choice without getting confused. For example, when doing the math section in the SAT test three months ago, I had to overcome within approximate one minute per question. Having mathematical formula for each type of question, being trained hundreds of exercises, I was quite confident in my answer. Finally, I got 650 points at that section.

Secondly, because of circumstances, not every choice we have to decide is taking much time. In reality, scores of decisions are similar to us every day, so we can quickly make the right choice. Most of visible examples are selecting the breakfast meal when we’re driving to the company or taking the test that we have done the same before, etc. Besides, many prompt decisions have been made on the edge of life and death. To illustrate that point, while the plane is going to fall, the pilot doesn’t have many selection and time to stay alive: jump out of the plane then parachute to safety or hope that there will be a miracle to survive from the explosion. And I don’t think someone will decide to stay in that moment.

From all of above-mentioned reasons, I think not all quickly made decisions are always wrong. Relying on your knowledge, skill and experience is the best way to master your prompt decision. Nowadays, quick decision is crucial to the world, and it will be useful if we know how to use.

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