#3 (permalink) Thu Feb 03, 2011 14:04 pm Re: are Parents the best teachers& |
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It is not a secret that our first teachers are our parents. Someone could say that quality of our first teachers might be difficult (?!? I don't really understand what you mean here) and it depends on many factors such as what family I was born in: in RICH family or in family of two unemployed, do my parents have an education or NOT? Even though somebody MAY HAVE bad parents, in my opinion, it also gives some advantages. Thus, I think that parents are the best teachers. In the following paragraphs I will give reasons to support my point of view. First of all, our parents gave us a life. From the first minutes of life they surround us WITH their love and care. They teach us to walk, speak and even eat. They care FOR us, give the NECESSARY medical service. Without parents I’ve never got so important knowledge such as WHETHER WHAT I'VE DONE IS BAD OR GOOD. Of course, we all copy the behavior of our parents in the childhood. Thus, parents UNINTENTIONALLY give us, even they don’t want, the samples of right behavior in one or other situations. For instance, it could be the way of behaving during the visit of guests. The second reason is that parents support us during all our life. They, FROM THE EXPERIENCE OF their own mistakes happened in the past, GIVE us ADVICES corresponding to different situations. It can be events related to how to BUY a car or HOW TO OVERCOME AN unsuccessful falling in love. Parents always TAKE care of us. Obviously, parents are the best teachers for everyone. To SUM up, I would like to say that without parents we have never felt real love. Parents teach everything and it actually corresponds to the parents’ ROLE in nature.
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Hi Kashmarkin, There are a lot of grammatical mistakes and misspellings in your essay I must say. Please read more to enrich your vocabulary as well as your grammar! _________________ Hope for the best, be prepared for the worst! |
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