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#1 (permalink) Fri Feb 04, 2011 5:09 am should university students attend classes |
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Check my essay, please!!! thanks!
Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. If I have to choose one option, I will stand behind the first one. There are some reasons why I hold this opinion..
First, when attending classes, students can receive the benefit of teacher’s knowledge which the materials in the textbooks cannot replace. Whether or not they are interested in a subject, what are written in the books are less practical compared to teachers’ knowledge. Moreover, going to classes, students can take advantaged of learning some additional information or watching documentary film which supplement their books. Teachers can throw light on chapters in the books that students are confused. Although some classes are so boring that students want to be absent from, I’m no doubt that unearthing the useful information in a professor’s lectures far overweigh them.
Second, if being forced to join classes, students are taught to be disciplined and responsible. Students have to enforce the school’s rule attending classes on time instead of staying bed late and studying whenever they want. It prepares students for competing in the workplace in future. In addition to, going to classes give them a chance to discuss topics held by the professor with their friend as well as learn how to deal with the variety of people who come from different places. By giving feedback or opposing to their friends’ viewpoints in a discussion, they are illuminated on many intelligent thoughts of their friends. That is the most reason people want to go to university.
In conclusion, students attend classes not only because the teaches can teach them methods of how to master knowledge but also they can learn from others in class. People who believe attending class should be optional are mislead.
TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture on agriculture |
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#2 (permalink) Tue Feb 08, 2011 6:53 am Re: should university students attend classes |
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| Qhuong90 wrote: |
Check my essay, please!!! thanks!
Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. If I have to choose one option, I will stand behind the first one. There are some reasons why I hold this opinion..
First, when attending classes, students can receive the benefit of teacher’s knowledge(,) which the materials in the textbooks cannot replace CANNOT BE REPLACED BY TEXTBOOK MATERIALS. Whether they are interested in a subject or not , what are written in the books are less practical compared to teachers’ knowledge. Moreover, going to classes, students can take advantage of learning some additional information or watching documentary film (,) which supplement their books. Teachers can throw light on chapters in the books that students are confused CONFUSE STUDENTS. Although some classes are so boring that students want to be absent from / ATTEND, I’m I HAVE no doubt that unearthing the useful information in a professor’s lectures far overweigh them?.
Second, if being forced to join classes, students are taught to be disciplined and responsible. Students have to enforce FOLLOW school ruleS, LIKE attending classes on time instead of staying IN bed late and studying whenever they want. It prepares students for competing in the workplaceS in THE future. In addition to, going to classes give them a chance to discuss topics held TAUGHT by theIR professorS with their friendS(,) as well as TO learn how to deal with the variety of people who come from different places. By giving feedback or opposing to their friends’ viewpoints in a discussion, they are illuminated on many intelligent thoughts of their friends. That is the most reason people want to go to universitIES
3RD REASON IS NEEDED! THE TOEFL ESSAY REQUIRES AT LEAST 3 REASONS.
In conclusion, students attend classes not only because the teaches can teach them methods of how to master knowledge(,) but also they can learn from others in classES. People(,) who believe attending class should be optional 9,0are mislead.
TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture on agriculture |
GOOD, PAY ATTENTION TO GRAMMAR AND MEANINGS OF WORDS, DON'T MISS 3 RD REASON NEXT TIME! GOOD LUCK! |
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#3 (permalink) Tue Feb 08, 2011 9:25 am should university students attend classes |
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There are some difficult topics that will trouble you with finding reasons to support. Therefore, for some topics, two specific reasons are already acceptable, as long as you can find examples to support them to make your essay persuasive. _________________ K-I-S-S
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#4 (permalink) Tue Feb 08, 2011 10:49 am should university students attend classes |
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| Alive wrote: |
| There are some difficult topics that will trouble you with finding reasons to support. Therefore, for some topics, two specific reasons are already acceptable, as long as you can find examples to support them to make your essay persuasive. |
I haven't face such an exception in TOEFL books ... |
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#5 (permalink) Tue Feb 08, 2011 16:38 pm should university students attend classes |
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Of course books will tell learners to do their best. Ok, I agree with you, there should be three paragraphs that indicate three reasons. We are learning, right? We should learn the best things. Agree. _________________ K-I-S-S
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