 #2 (permalink) Tue Feb 08, 2011 7:10 am Re: Agree or Disagree: In twenty years, students will no longer read printed book |
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One week before an exam in libraries, it is not difficult to see people holding books, reading and fighting with their eyes to keep them open. However, in twenty years, those printing books will no longer be read (,) because students will take internet courses, use computer to read and preserve tree by not reading printed books.
To begin with, student will have online courses. As students are living in twenty first century with invention of internet, life becomes easier than the past without internet. The internet has become a center of student’s life; A student can do everything with use of internet, and there is no exception for an education. When they take online courses, every material is provided on online with pictures and videos. And they can actually understand better with the materials provided on online courses than IN printed bookS (,) which only can provide them with letters and pictures.
In addition, student will use computer to read books. That is because every student is in consensus REALIZE that it is difficult, and physically overwhelming to carry lots of books on their back every day to school. So, lots of educational book companies are now actually making CDs (,) which contains reading materials for the sake of easiness for students. According to THE Ministry of education of Japan, in 7 years, students will no longer need to carry books to schools(,) BUT and WILL read most of academic materials through computers with CDs
On top of that, as far as environment is concerned, a tree will be preserved. Thousands of treeS are being cut for creating/PRODUCING/PREPARATION books. But HOWEVER, treeS function as air cleaner and produces fresh air (,) which is the most important for living. Actually, more books are being cut than being planted. So, within twenty years, as air is polluted, and world issue right now is preserving environment, tree will not be cut for making books and therefore, students will not read printed books.
To sum up, with THE invention of internet and computer, and increasing as concern about the environment is , within twenty years, students will no longer read printed books.
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