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 #1 (permalink) Mon Feb 07, 2011 15:25 pm Topic:A transportation vehicle that has changed people’s lives |
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Topic: Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives.
Automobiles; bicycles; airplanes.
use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A transportation vehicle that has changed people’s lives
The invention, production, and distribution of the automobile radically altered people’s lives in the twentieth century. Perhaps more than other inventions.
There are different ways in which the automobile changed human society. One of the ways is playing a positive part in changing the way of communications between people. Before the invention of the automobiles, we couldn’t imagine that we can leave our hometown to meet other friends in a short time with few cost, but Automobile has made this possible. For example, it’s been always said that dating practices was the result of the development of automobile. Before people owning cars, "dating" seemed did not exist; However, nowadays, boys and girls could meet as soon as they give each other message, the car will drive them to wherever they want to in a very short time.
Automobile not only changed the way of people communicate with each other, in addition, it has also changed the price of transporting goods, which to some extend change the way people live. In the past, it was hard for people to taste the food or fruits came from other areas, not to mention that came from other countries because of the high price and Inconvenient, only the rich could afford to buy those things. While after the invention of the automobiles, low price goods have become possible because of the convenient of transportation.
Moreover, the advancement of modern transportation, especially automobiles, have accelerated the speed of building our society. In the first years of the automobiles industries, they were used as tools to move people from one place to another place, as well as used as tools to help people carry goods and materials to other place in purpose of construction and trading. Without the widely spread of automobiles, we couldn’t have such a high -speed development of human society.
Generally speaking, the effects of the automobile on human culture extend beyond as I mentioned above. We could not deny that how dependent we are on the automobile.
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| #2 (permalink) Mon Feb 07, 2011 19:56 pm Re: Topic:A transportation vehicle that has changed people’s lives |
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| Sabrinayaa wrote: |
Topic: Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives: Automobiles; bicycles; air planes. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The invention, production, and distribution of the automobile have radically altered people’s lives more than any other invention has done. There are many different ways in which the automobile changed human life, and I will point them out below.
First, automobiles are playing a positive part in changing the way people communicate. Before the invention of the automobile, we couldn’t imagine that we can leave our hometown to meet other friends in a short time with low cost, but automobile has made this possible. For example, it’s been always said that dating was a result of the development of automobiles. Before cars’ existence, "dating" seemed not to exist; however, nowadays, boys and girls could meet as soon as they leave each other messages, the car will drive them to wherever they want to in a very short time. (I don’t think your statement is true. We can still date without cars. Any way, the sentence sounds awkward.)
Automobile not only changed the way of people communicate with each other but also it has changed the cost of transporting goods, which to a certain extent has changed the way people live. In the past, it was hard for people to taste foods and fruits that came from other areas, not to mention those that came from other countries because of the high expense and inconvenient. Only the rich could afford to buy those things. However, after the invention of the automobile, low price goods have become available because of the convenience of transportation.
Moreover, the advancement of modern transportation, especially automobiles, has accelerated the speed of building our society. In the first years of the automobile industry, automobiles were used as tools to move people from places to places, as well as used as tools to help people carry goods and materials to other places in purpose of construction and trading. Without the wide spread of automobiles, we couldn’t have such a high – speed development of human society.
Generally speaking, the effects of the automobile on human culture and life extend beyond as I mentioned above. We could not deny that we have become very dependent on the automobile.
TOEFL listening lectures: What does 'monotreme' mean? |
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| #3 (permalink) Wed Feb 09, 2011 9:04 am Re: Topic:A transportation vehicle that has changed people’s lives |
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| Oad wrote: |
| Sabrinayaa wrote: |
Topic: Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives: Automobiles; bicycles; air planes. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The invention, production, and distribution of the automobile have radically altered people’s lives more than any other invention has done. There are many different ways in which the automobile changed human life, and I will point them out below.
First, automobiles are playing a positive part in changing the way people communicate. Before the invention of the automobile, we couldn’t imagine that we can leave our hometown to meet other friends in a short time with low cost, but automobile has made this possible. For example, it’s been always said that dating was a result of the development of automobiles. Before cars’ existence, "dating" seemed not to exist; however, nowadays, boys and girls could meet as soon as they leave each other messages, the car will drive them to wherever they want to in a very short time. (I don’t think your statement is true. We can still date without cars. Any way, the sentence sounds awkward.)
Automobile not only changed the way of people communicate with each other but also it has changed the cost of transporting goods, which to a certain extent has changed the way people live. In the past, it was hard for people to taste foods and fruits that came from other areas, not to mention those that came from other countries because of the high expense and inconvenient. Only the rich could afford to buy those things. However, after the invention of the automobile, low price goods have become available because of the convenience of transportation.
Moreover, the advancement of modern transportation, especially automobiles, has accelerated the speed of building our society. In the first years of the automobile industry, automobiles were used as tools to move people from places to places, as well as used as tools to help people carry goods and materials to other places in purpose of construction and trading. Without the wide spread of automobiles, we couldn’t have such a high – speed development of human society.
Generally speaking, the effects of the automobile on human culture and life extend beyond as I mentioned above. We could not deny that we have become very dependent on the automobile.
TOEFL listening lectures: What does 'monotreme' mean? |
Hello, I checked your essay as well as I can. You can avoid some glaring errors by using a dictionary or spelling and grammar checking program in Microsoft word after you finish your essay.
Check my corrections carefully.
Wait to read your next essay. |
Thank you for your help.
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| #4 (permalink) Wed Feb 09, 2011 9:15 am Re: Topic:A transportation vehicle that has changed people’s lives |
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| Oad wrote: |
| Sabrinayaa wrote: |
Topic: Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives: Automobiles; bicycles; air planes. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The invention, production, and distribution of the automobile have radically altered people’s lives more than any other invention has done. There are many different ways in which the automobile changed human life, and I will point them out below.
First, automobiles are playing a positive part in changing the way people communicate. Before the invention of the automobile, we couldn’t imagine that we can leave our hometown to meet other friends in a short time with low cost, but automobile has made this possible. For example, it’s been always said that dating was a result of the development of automobiles. Before cars’ existence, "dating" seemed not to exist; however, nowadays, boys and girls could meet as soon as they leave each other messages, the car will drive them to wherever they want to in a very short time. (I don’t think your statement is true. We can still date without cars. Any way, the sentence sounds awkward.)
Automobile not only changed the way of people communicate with each other but also it has changed the cost of transporting goods, which to a certain extent has changed the way people live. In the past, it was hard for people to taste foods and fruits that came from other areas, not to mention those that came from other countries because of the high expense and inconvenient. Only the rich could afford to buy those things. However, after the invention of the automobile, low price goods have become available because of the convenience of transportation.
Moreover, the advancement of modern transportation, especially automobiles, has accelerated the speed of building our society. In the first years of the automobile industry, automobiles were used as tools to move people from places to places, as well as used as tools to help people carry goods and materials to other places in purpose of construction and trading. Without the wide spread of automobiles, we couldn’t have such a high – speed development of human society.
Generally speaking, the effects of the automobile on human culture and life extend beyond as I mentioned above. We could not deny that we have become very dependent on the automobile.
TOEFL listening lectures: What does 'monotreme' mean? |
Hello, I checked your essay as well as I can. You can avoid some glaring errors by using a dictionary or spelling and grammar checking program in Microsoft word after you finish your essay.
Check my corrections carefully.
Wait to read your next essay. |
Hi,
I think without cars, we couldn't date other people at any time we want and any where we want to, that's what I want to express.
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