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[Docco]

Topic : Students today often use technology in schools or when studying on their own. Explain a time or an assignment when you used technology to learn something .

Nowadays people use technology to make their own life easier . Also, students use technology for studying such as computer, projector, mp3 player , microscope , calculator and so on . For my part , I use technology to study better and learn more new things .

Because I have to study from the morning until the evening all week to prepare for a university entrance examination , I do not have enough time to learn English on my computer . I recorded Toefl listening exercises on my mp3 player and so I can practice English listening lessons everywhere , any time I am possible . For example , when I go to school by bus, I can use mp3 player to listen English . Like this I can go to school and improve my English at the same time . It is really convenient ! Moreover , with mp3 I also can improve my English speaking skill . I speak English and record my voice first . Then I listen again my own speaking and find out pronunciation errors .

In recent years , my school equipped each class with a computer and a projector . With this well studying condition students will be more active in learning new things and finding out information to complete their knowledge during the process of studying. I also use computer to download English, Math, Physic , Chemist exercises on the internet to practice and prepare for a university entrance examination . Besides I also use computer to do my electronic presentations for my group if my teacher request us to do.
Especially computer is very necessary for me when I learn computer graphics in the future .

With the helps of technology I can try to achieve active learning way . Knowledge in traditional school is limited to textbooks and teacher do not have enough time to enlighten me as to the complicated questions . Whereas just a click of mouse I can access website with full information I need . And with a small mp3 player I can improve my English by myself . Knowledge and abilities of people will be more and more widen when studying in condition with modern equipments .

TOEFL listening lectures: Who are not included as members of the Underground Railroad?

[Bookaholic_English]

[Bookaholic_English]

Sorry about my unability to write in bold my corrections. Just try to read it and ask questions.
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Rolling stone gathers no moss.

[Beeesneees]

Hi BE,

If I might just add for your future information: 'inability' not 'unability'.
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Cheers m' dears!

[Torsten]

Hi Doco, I suggest you pay more attention to the spacing (no spaces after commas and full stops).

TOEIC listening, photographs: A super highway

[Bookaholic_English]

Thank you...but please tell me why I haven't received any emails for any topic responses.
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Rolling stone gathers no moss.