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#2 (permalink) Fri Feb 18, 2011 0:07 am Help me out |
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1. correct 2. Your second attempt is better. 3. There is an unforeseen problem with the project. 4. correct 5. As you suspect, that would not be the best example of use of 'vicinity'... but it is correct. There is only one bank in the vicinity. 6. correct, but 'she is an amateur musician' would be better. 7. correct. 8. 'molest' would not be used in this example. It applies to the pestering or harassment of someone, typically in an aggressive or persistent manner. Where it means 'to attack' it indicates a sexual assault or sexual abuse of a person, especially a woman or child. 9. Use of 'dreadful' would be correct but your choice of the word 'atmosphere' isn't good there. There was a dreadful atmosphere in the room. _________________ Cheers m' dears! |
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#3 (permalink) Fri Feb 18, 2011 2:01 am Help me out |
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| Thank you so much B :) |
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Nie I'm here quite often ;-)
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#4 (permalink) Fri Feb 18, 2011 2:16 am Help me out |
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By the way, what about if I put "sentence number 9" this way: The army makes the atmosphere dreadful.
Would it make the sentence correct?
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Nie I'm here quite often ;-)
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#6 (permalink) Fri Feb 18, 2011 5:26 am Help me out |
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| Nie wrote: |
By the way, what about if I put "sentence number 9" this way: The army makes the atmosphere dreadful.
Would it make the sentence correct?
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It still sounds strange, Nie.
The army cannot 'make' the atmosphere.
There is a dreadful atmosphere in the army. _________________ Cheers m' dears! |
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#7 (permalink) Fri Feb 18, 2011 9:34 am Help me out |
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| I see. Thanks |
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Nie I'm here quite often ;-)
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