childhood is the happiest time of a person life?

[Amoshik]

Could anyone correct my essay and rate it.
Thanks.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement childhood is the happiest time of a person life?
To say the truth, if this question was addressed to me when I was child, surely I would answer that childhood was not the happiest period in life. Children mostly depend on parents’ opinion and decisions. They have to do some actions which they do not want: go to school, do lesson systematic, read books, obey parents’ wishes and etc. However, as I am adult now I do agree with the statement.
First of all, as happiness is a short period of time and for state the value of happiness, appreciate it could only adult people.In this period children do not think about daily problems. It does not interesting them and life seems like fairy tale.
Secondly, childhood is period of irresponsibility. They do not feel responsibility for their actions, even If they commit a crime. Only parents assumed full liability for their children's actions.For instance, once in our school parents paid for windowsbroken by their children.
Summarizing the said above childhood is the happiest time for elder people not for children. It is time to live without

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[Katty2010]

Hi Amoshik, this essay would not help you. You have to atleast write 300-350 with atleast two or three valid reasons, examples and explaination.
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[Katty2010]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement childhood is the happiest time of a person life?

To SPEAK the truth, if this question was addressed to me when I was A child, surely I would HAD answerED that childhood was not the happiest period in life. Children mostly depend on parents’ opinionS and decisions. They have to do some actions which they do not want TO LIKE goING to school, COMPLETE lessonS systematicALLY, read books, obey parents’ wishes and etc. However, as I am AN adult now I do agree with the statement.

First of all, as happiness is a short period of time [CUT]and for state the value of happiness, appreciate it could only adult people[CUT].In this period children do not think about daily problems. It does not interest them and life seems like fairy tale.

Secondly, childhood is period of irresponsibility. They do not feel responsibilE for their actions, even If they commit a crime. Only parents assume full liability for their child's actions. For instance, once in our school parents paid for THE broken WINODW, BROKEN by their children.

TO SummarizE [CUT]the said above[CUT] childhood SEEMS TO the happiest time OF OUR LIFE WHEN WE GET OLDER.
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Just a confused kid... trying to live through twists & turns of life!
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Everything Is Temporary!

[Amoshik]

Hello Katty
Thanks a lot for your correction.
Sincerely,
Amoshik