universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activ

[Qhuong90]

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I disagree with the statement that universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries. There are two reason why I hold this opinion.
First, it costs too much money to have a well- equipped library. Many of the facilities in the library are expensive to buy and maintain. For example, we need money to update the information and the newest books which are just published in the world to meet students’ requirements. Moreover, computer systems in the library need to be connected to the internet that make it easy for student to access the most up to date knowledge around the world as well as exchange experiences to other students outside their university. If the library is only offer students resources of a decade ago, it does not only damage the university reputation but also prevent students from stepping further in their future career. There is no doubt in my mind that with a limited amount of money, it is better to invest it on library than the students’ sports activities.
Another reason that strengthen my opinion is that sport activities can be still celebrated even if there is a lack of facility. Running is an example. Whenever we are mess up with assignments and exams, we can run around the school campus. It is a waste of money to build a sport center equipped with swimming pool, tennis court, gym… when students can do their run around campus without money. The university can set aside some money to improve their library system as well as guarantee students’ health by organizing a marathon contest every month to encourage students to run everyday. Although sports are necessary in enhancing students’ mental and physic, there is no need to spend as much money on it as library.
In conclusion, it is the school’s responsibility to provide students with all necessary tools they need. Sports activities are simply a supplement to their study. We do not need to squander money on something that we have another simple way to implement it..

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between two students (1)

[Hanoi]

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[Katty2010]

I disagree with the statement that universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries. There are two reason why I hold this opinion.

FirstLY, it costs too much money to have a well- equipped library. Many of the facilities in the library are expensive to buy and maintain. For example, we need money to update the information and PURCHASE LATest books which are just published in the world to meet students’ requirements. Moreover, computer systems in the library need to be connected to the internet WHICH makeS it easy for studentS to access the most up to date knowledge around the world as well as exchange experiences WITH other students outside their university. If the library is only offerING students OLD resources of a decade ago, it does not only damage the university'S reputation but also preventS students from stepping further in their future career. There is no doubt in my mind that with a limited amount of money, it is better to invest it on library than the students’ sports activities.

Another reason that strengthenS my opinion is that sport activities can be still celebrated TAKE PLACE even if there is a lack of facility. Running is an example. Whenever we are mess up with assignments and exams, STRESSED OUT we can run around the school campus. It is a waste of money to build a sportS center equipped with swimming pool, tennis court, gym… when students can do their run around campus without money. The university can set aside some money to improve their library system as well as guarantee students’ health by organizing a marathon contest every month to encourage students to JOGG everyday. Although sports are necessary in enhancing students’ mental and physicAL HEALTH, there is no need to spend as much money on it as library.

TO concluDE, it is the school’s responsibility to provide students with all necessary LEARNING tools they need. Sports activities are simply a supplement to their study. We do not need to squander money on something that we have another simple way to implement it.
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