Unemployment people

[Elmir050]

Unemployment is one of the biggest problem in the world.There are several reasons existence fort jobless:low education level, war between countries ,social inequality, and etc.
Some experts offer that there should be internet access between unemployment people.Unemployment bring low rate level and social unfairness states.There are not any kind of insurance between jobless people .How can internet help unemployment people to find job or gain some knowledge and experience ?
Internet is the most important part of the leisure activities. In spite of damaging consequences ,there have useful activities in internet.Firstly,different type programs ,which is need to enter job.Consider this matter government or non-governmental organizations should create co,puter courses ,(which people is unemployment) and to teach them computer programs.Other preventable things establish job find site.Jobless people can enter this site and apply some jobs ,which is suitable each person speciality.
Internet is also huge unreal world called virtual life.There have distinctive job opportunities,to get money and other these kind of activities and chances in internet.Some of workers, works from home.In 2020 works from home will arrive 20 -25 percent in European Union countries .Moreover poor countries have chance to learn other countries experience ,how they can decreases unemployment low level. After learned the experience governments should share other countries knowledge of their own countries .
At last we can say that internet influence our lives negative and positive aspects for instance,change humans minds,create new job opportunities,prevent vast time and etc.Consider all of these impacts governments should make sure they have access to the internet .
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[Katty2010]

Unemployment is one of the biggest problemS in the world.There are several reasons existING for joblessNESS:low education level, war between countries ,social inequality, and etc.

Some experts offer that there should be AN internet access between PROVIDED TO unemployED people. Unemployment bringS low rate level (OF WHAT??) and STATE OF social unfairness states.There are not any kind of insurance between GIVEN TO jobless people .How can internet help unemployment people to find job or gain some knowledge and experience ?

Internet is the most important part of the leisure activities. In spite of damaging consequences ,there have ARE useful activities On internet.

Firstly,different types of programsS ,which ARE needED to enter job INDUSTRY. ConsiderING this matter government or non-governmental organizations should PROVIDE coMputer courses FOR UNEMPLOYED peoplE to teach them computer programs. Other PEOPLE CAN POST THIER CVS ON JOBS DATABASE ONLINE.preventable things establish job find site.Jobless people can enter this site and apply some jobs ,which is suitable each person speciality.

Internet is also huge AN unreal world called virtual life.There have BEEN distinctive job opportunities,to get money AVAILABLE and other these kind of activities and chances On internet. Some of workers, works from home. In 2020 works from home will arrive THRIVE TO 20 -25 percent in European Union countries .Moreover poor countries have A chance to learn ABOUT other countries experience AND how they can decreases unemployment low level. After learnING the experience governments should share other countries knowledge of their own countries .

At last we can say that internet influences our lives negatively and positively aspects for instance, IT CAN change human minds,create new job opportunities,prevent vast time and etc.ConsiderING all of these impacts governments should make sure THAT UNEMPLOYED PEOPLE SHOULD have access to the internet .

Hi Elmir! You are giving Introduction to your essay in 3rd paragraph which is WRONG!
Your sentence contruction is not correct. Please go through your mistakes. Read atleast 2 passages a day, listen to english conversations and then write.
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