Review the previous essays.

[Pasban110]

Hi,
I recently started to review the old essays when Kitos left us. You know, it is so deem enough to lose a friend, but it also has its points. For example in my case, I started off reading essays carefully.

I also have read the first essays when I joined up to this site. On that moment, I was not familiar with the links, forums, and threads. However, today, I remembered that the first essays, the larger numbers at the bottom of this thread contains a lot of helpful points that ALAN as a first teacher has left for the first learners.

I read some of them. He has described the reasons of mistakes. The essays themselves are the same like yours and mine, but the point is that there are some extra explanations at the end of some corrections.

I myself started reading them. Let's review them before writing another essay.

Salivan.

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