Money is important in most people's lives, although some people think it is more

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Money is important in most people's lives, although some people think it is more important than others are. What do you feel are the right uses of money? What other factors are important for a good life?

Welfare and money have become coherent notions. At the same time, there are pole conceptions of how to use money and many of them are very generous and merit attention of society. However, many people share the opinion that money is not able to replace overwhelming majority of aspects of lives. It is important to outline that, from my point of view; using money should imply kindness and many things in the world can be more valuable than money.
Firstly, in society there are different ideas of how to spend money. Some people decide to invest as much as possible money in property of to buy a luxury car. However, this selfish conduct distorts the gist of humanity because people should use significant amount of money for supporting charity organisations because poor people cannot rely on somebody except charity foundations. At the same time, it would a great idea to help people from Africa who are suffering from famine.
Secondly, it is important to emphasise that money is not able to be universal substitute to many vital things in people's lives. For instance, we are not able to buy love of other people or to force our classmates to admire us. In general, it is vital to distinguish material things such as cars and spiritual things such as friendship. The last group is integral and irreplaceable part of every life because you cannot purchase them even for all gold in the world.
In conclusion, it is crucial to outline the key points of the essay. There are different approaches to spending money, however, the most admirable are those, which are directed to support of (I have used it as a noun) other people. In addition, money is not able to help us to make close friends or to create kind atmosphere in family. Finally, I believe that money is not everything in the world and they are many valuable things, which should not be overlooked by people.

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