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#1 (permalink) Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:12 am do you agree or disagree that young people should take several different kinds of |
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Views differ greatly when it comes to the statement that young people should take several different kinds of job before they take a career for the long term. Some people believe that young people can try many different jobs before they find their perfect job. On the other side of the divide, people believe that young people should think carefully before they take a job and not to change their jobs too often. Personally, I disagree with the statement from the very beginning/outset. Following are some reasons to support my viewpoint.
In the first place, people who take several different kinds of job may represent that they haven’t figured out what kind of job they prefer yet. I think that we should find out our own interest before we start to work. It is too time-consuming to try different jobs until we find a perfect job. Besides, taking too many jobs may have a negative effect on our resume.
In the second place, some young people switch their jobs from one to another just because they easily get tired of the same job. They tend to be attracted by the new jobs they have never done before. In that case, the problem is not from the job but from the person himself. By holding this kind of attitude, young people cannot find the job for their long term career.
Finally, there are some people who lack patience so they change their job once they face difficulties on their job. Then they make an excuse that the job is not an ideal job. When people start to try solving problems on their job, I believe their job will appears to be much more interesting than it did before.
In conclusion, people switching between several different kinds of jobs may mean not only people don’t understand themselves, but they tend to get tired of routines. In addition, young people may take different jobs just because they encounter some troubles. As a result, I strongly believe that young people should not take several different kinds of job before they take a career for the long term.
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Adrian325 New Member
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#2 (permalink) Sun Mar 06, 2011 12:20 pm reply |
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Views differ greatly when it comes to the statement that young people should take several different kinds of job before they take a career for the long term. Some people believe that young people can try many different jobs before they find their perfect job. On the other HAND side of the divide, people believe that young people should think carefully before they take a job and not to change their jobs too often. Personally, I disagree with the statement DUE TOfrom the very beginning/outset. Following are some reasons. to support my viewpoint.
FIRSTLY, people who take several different kinds of jobS may represent that they haven’t figured out what kind of job they prefer yet. I think that we should find out our own interest before we start to work. It is too time-consuming to try different jobs until we find a perfect job. Besides, taking too many jobs may have a negative effect on our resume.
SECONDLY, some young people switch their jobs from one to another just because they easily get tired of the same job. They tend to be attracted by the new jobs they have never done before. In that case, the problem is not from the job but from the person himself. By holding this kind of attitude, young people cannot find the job for their long term career.
In addition, young people may take different jobs just because they encounter some troubles. As a result, I strongly believe that young people should not take several different kinds of job before they take a career for the long term.
Finally, there are some people who lack patience so they change their job once they face difficulties AT their job. Then they make an excuse that the job is not an ideal job. When people start to try solving problems AT their job, I believe their job will appears to be much more interesting than it did BEEN before.
In conclusion, people WHO LIKE switching between several different kinds of jobs may mean not only [s]people THEY[/s] SEEM LIKE PEOPLE WHO don’t understand themselves AND THEY HAVE TENDENCY, but they tend to get tired of routines.
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#3 (permalink) Fri Mar 11, 2011 12:47 pm do you agree or disagree that young people should take several different kinds of |
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Adrian325 New Member
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#4 (permalink) Fri Mar 11, 2011 14:20 pm youth in Poland |
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Dear Adrian,
I presume that you could reveal story about yourself. I am a young woman, I live in Poland - the much hated country by every other nation. I am a student still and I know how tough is to make ends meet if you want to won everything. I like working from time to time. To be honest - I know it by my own - I don't want to work in telemarketing (1 month and I was sick and tired of my boss - 'you should be selling more'), I don't want to be a finansial advisor (two weeks and agreement of future paying for other clients and co-workers), maybe I will find a job in a bank or accountment. There is no nothing wich stay less than an employment for youths in PL.
hopefully, my future will improve. B.I. |
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