Do you think people take care about environmental problems?

[Natybrisa]

Please, I'm practising writing essays becuase I have an exam on Wednesday. could anyone check it?

Do you think people take care about environmental problems?

Nowadays the entire world has to face a variety of environmental problems which are the negative consequences of the industrial revolution and the excessive man’s consumption of natural resources. The main causes of this natural deterioration are the pollution and the overpopulation.

The biggest polluter today is the car. Exhausted fumes are the main cause of bad air quality, which can make people feel ill and have difficulty in Breathing. Unfortunately, cars increased every year and this cause not only serious health problems but also the cut down of trees, which are the Earth´s lungs, for the building of new roads.

Moreover, the air polluted from other sources such as the burning of coal, gasoline and trash contribute to air pollution. When we burn these material in order to make electricity, gases are expelled and they go up and into the Earth´s atmosphere. Due to the heat cannot escape, the Earth get warmer. This is known as Global Warming. It may cause the North and South Pole to melt and sea levels to rise, leading to serious flooding in many parts of the world. Nevertheless, Government do not invest money to implement the right strategies like offering support to people to change from carbon-based energy to eco-friendly forms of energy.

Another environmental problem is overpopulation. The World´s growing population has been a primary cause of threatened species and rain forest destruction, Due to the construction of homes buildings, roads that threatens many ecosystems. As more space is needed for people more forest are chopped down; as more land is needed for farms there is less rooms for wildlife. Soon, the increased in world´s human population mans that will be in danger of living in a world which is much less rich than the past.

All in all, the environmental problems are worldwide issues now. They are not resolved only by individual or one institution. They need our collective endeavors. I hope the government and each citizen can understand that is our moral responsibility to curb these problems and make the Earth a livable place for our next generation.

By Irupe Gonzalez

TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture in Political Science

[Katty2010]

Naty try writing on other topics too please. Here is a link:-www.kazuo.fc2web.com/English/TOEFL-essay.htm

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[Katty2010]

Nowadays the entire world has to face a variety of environmental problems which are the DUE TO negative consequences of the industrial revolution and the excessive man’s consumption of natural resources. The main causes of this natural deterioration are the pollution and the overpopulation. I PERSONALLY THINK PEOPLE DON'T TAKE CARE ABOUT ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS. (Naty you have to state in first paragraph what do YOU think.)

The biggest polluter today is the car. Exhausted fumes are the main cause of bad air quality AIR POLLUTION, which can make people feel ill and have difficulty in breathing. Unfortunately, cars HAVE increased OVER yearS and this HAS causeD not only serious health problems but also the cutTING down of trees, which are the Earth´s lungs, for the building of new roads.

Moreover, the air polluted from other sources such as the burning of coal, gasoline and trash contribute to air pollution. When we burn these material in order to make electricity, gases are expelled and they go up and into the Earth´s atmosphere. Due to THAT the heat cannot escape, CAUSING the Earth TO get warmer. This is known as Global Warming. It may cause the North and South Pole to melt and sea levels to rise, leading to serious flooding in many parts of the world. Nevertheless, Government do not invest money to implement the right strategies like offering support to people to change from carbon-based energy to eco-friendly forms of energy.

Another environmental problem is overpopulation. The World´s growing population has been a primary cause of threatened species and rain forest destruction due to the construction of homes, buildings, roads that HAS threaten many ecosystems. As more space is needed for people more forestS are chopped down; as more land is needed for farms there is less rooms for wildlife. Soon, the increased in world´s human population mans[/s[s]] that will be in danger of living in a world which is much less rich than the past.

All in all, the environmental problems are worldwide issues now. They are not resolved only by individual or one institution. They need our collective endeavors. I hope the government and each citizen can understand that is our moral responsibility to curb these problems and make the Earth a livable place for our next generation.

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Well Said :)!
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[Natybrisa]

Thanks Katty. Yes, I will try to do that.