Do you agree or disagree that government should spend more money on education for

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Do you agree or disagree that government should spend more money on education for young children than in university.

There are several pros and cons to consider when discussing whether government should spend more money on early education than on university education. Some people assert that children play extraordinarily profound roles in the future, while others have negative attitudes toward this policy. Despite many diversified opinions aired by diverse people based on their personal stance, there can be no doubt that government should put more emphasis on higher education is under the aegis of popular belief.

First of all, universities need a great deal of money to support their huge expenses than the early education. In order to offer the well-equipped laboratories to students, universities not only invest in high-tech equipment but also hire well-known professors. Those precision instruments can help students to accomplish many tough experiments, therefore, accelerating the development of new technology. As you can see, advanced technology is very significant for a development country both in industry and economy. That’s why I am great convinced that government should take those aspects into discreet consideration.

Another thing worth mentioning is that undergraduate students would have more competitive advantages to pursue their goal when they receive adequate resource from school. That’s to say, schools have to offer various academic courses and practical programs for students to choose from and those lecturers are more complex than early education. Once those well-discipline students graduate from school, they can find appropriate work easily. In this way, the unemployment rate would descent and the public order would better than before. There is no gainsaying that the government should allocate more money for university education.

Admittedly, a well-prepared early education program may have significant impact on the follow-up development of children’s learning. However, I insist that university education is the best investment for the government due to the numerous benefits it would bring about.

On the whole, I hold that the quality of early childhood education isn’t the first priority issue for the government to considerate. Nevertheless, we can be safe in saying that the university education is the most essential factor of a country’s

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