Some people say that online learning is the most effective and convenient way to

[Drskaaa]

Some people say that online learning is the most effective and convenient way to learn.
Others say that online learning will never be as effective as learning at real school, in person.
Discus both these views and give your own opinion.

Internet popularization in the past decade has led to developing of new kind of learning, online learning. In recent years both methods have been used to educate thirsty for knowledge people all over the world. Both means of learning: internet and real school has their own advantages and disadvantages.
On the one side, real school education is the most common, proved and advanced way of learning. The mass of community consider real school method as the only way of education. Moreover, this part of the society can not accept any alternatives of learning such as online learning. Their view opposes to the new alternative of learning and accepts it as an effective. The opinion of supporters of learning in person has no place for substitution and resting the time of students.
On the other side of the conflict, are people how considered online education as more effective and acceptable way of learning. Their main motive is that Globalization has changed the world reality and nowadays people’s need of education has shifted and can not be satisfied any more by the old and clumsy in person method. Thus, people how can not have the chance and time to travel to the school destination because of money issue or their job location, now this borders and restrictions are history. Internet progress and improving are more than enough to allow an effective and a sufficiently high level of learning.
In my opinion there is no more effective way of education than in person learning. People who want to gain as more benefits as they can from education should accept only real schools as a mean of learning. In real school learning students have the chance to feel the spirit of the stories and articles, to have disputes with their opposites and to discuss problems they are studying about. What is more effective than real life discussions?

I've just finished this one. What do you guys think about it? I plan to get TOEFL in two months.

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[Katty2010]

Internet popularization in the past decade has led to developMENTing of new kind of learning, online learning. In recent years both methods have been used to educate thirsty for knowledge people all over the world. Both means of learning: internet and real school has their own advantages and disadvantages.

On the one side, real school education is the most common, proved and advanced way of learning. The mass of community consider real school method as the only way of education. Moreover, this part of the society can not accept any alternatives of learning such as online learning. Their view opposes to the new alternative of learning and DOES NOT accepts it as an effective METHOD OF LEARNING. The opinion of supporters of learning in person has no place for substitution and resting the time of students.

On the other side of the conflict, THERE are people how WHO considered online education as more effective and acceptable way of learning. Their main motive is that Globalization has changed the world reality and nowadays people’s need of education has shifted and can not be satisfied any more by the old and clumsy in person method. Thus, people how WHO can not have the chance and time to travel to the school destination because of money issue or their job location, FOR THEM now thEsS borders and restrictions are history. Internet progress and improvMENTing are more than enough to allow an effective and a sufficiently high level of learning.

In my opinion there is no more effective way of education than in person learning. People who want to gain as more benefits as they can from education should accept only real schools as a mean of learning. In real school learning students have the chance to feel the spirit of the stories and articles, to have disputes with their opposites and to discuss problems they are studying about. What is more effective than real life discussions?

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