 #1 (permalink) Mon Mar 14, 2011 2:50 am Toefl: Parents are the best teachers. Agree/Disagree. |
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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Every child needs a teacher to develop. A best teacher makes a child a good citizen. I strongly agree with the statement that parents are the best teachers. No one can be better than parents.
When a child gets a birth, he remains all the time with his parents until he earns money for his life. I remembered that I learnt walking by holding my father's finger. The first word which I said 'father' which learnt from my parents. Parents teach good habit to a child. Parents tries a child to avoid bad habit by making him realized. Parents teach a child to give respect to others. They teach good manners to a child. Parents always get credited by elders when a child gives respect to them.
Parents always worry about a child's career. When he gets an age to study, he admits him into a school for his great future. Parents make a child used to with study. Parents explain to a child an important of education in life. When I was a child, I did not like to go school but all the time, I heard from my parents that education is necessary to earn good money. They always tell me that I would not get any desired thing in my life if I do not go school and complete my study.
Parents also remain aware about their son's future even if he becomes a mature. Parents always tell his son to set a goal to achieve in his life.
My friend, james decided to be a doctor when he was just 15. He was decided that goal from his parents' advice.
In brief, parents are a real god who always remain with his child. Parents never let down his son in any situation. They always teach his son to be a good and honest citizen of the country.
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Well, I got couple of mistakes with my previous essays. So, I tried little bit hard to avoid those mistake like missing articles or improper use of it and wrong sentence structure. So, have I improved myself, this time?
Please review my essay,
Thanking you
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