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Human becomes a pain for animals. Human needs a space to live and also for his development. Human started building new communities, societies, shopping complex and business empires. To fulfill the requirement of increasing population, he started destroying the trees which lead to damage to the habitats of animals. Animals habitats are no longer exist. I disagree with the point of view that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals.
Human started destroying trees. As a result, animals' habitats are no longer available. Animals started entering the human developed areas. For example, I often see a group of monkeys in my society and they harrass people. They always come for searching food. Sometimes, they become offensive during monson time if someone tries to drive them out. They do not have space to get protection from rain. Trees deforestation also affect the small aminals badly. Like dogs and pigs. Due to human development, some spicies or animals are about to disappear or already disappeared. Some animals spieces become history for animal nature.
Due to deforestation, animals have problem in finding their daily food. Sometimes, I see a cow searching for vegetation to eat. If it fails to find its food, it will eat plastic or paper waste which is bad for its health.
Human also started developing his house on water which results into water pollution. Fish and other water creatures often feel disturbance from presence of human in water. I have spend some days on house boat built in the lake. I realized that fishes had been disappeared in that lake because of water pollution in lake due to mismaintained by human.
To sum it up, human should reserve some land for animals which help them to live safely and convenient to find food. Also reserved land allow them to move freely. |
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