U.S. native speakers, please is it correct?

[Nonative]

Hey everyone! I need to evaluate a text edited by American. Is it good or fine or excellent US English? Please if it's possible!

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you can find a small portion of this here: http:// textoma. narod 2. ru /

[Beeesneees]

If you need to evaluate it, you have to do a lot more than just say whether it is 'good or fine or excellent'. Tell us what you think about it.
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[Nonative]

I think it is not a bad language. Well maybe a trifle too heavy... But I can't evaluate this to the full because my English is not fine. I've believed it would be reasonable to ask US native speakers...

[Beeesneees]

Well, I've just looked at it and think it is a perfect example of advertising spam!
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