roars of joy

[Nathan Mckane]

Hello dear teachers and friends!

Would you please tell me what is wrong with those sentences?

The shouts and roars of joy rose from people.

He acted trecherously towards his friend.( He betrayed his friend.)

God joined the hearts of John and Marry.( God made them love each other)

Thanks in advance.

[Beeesneees]

Either use the article in both places, or don't use it at all.
'Shouts and roars of joy rose from people'
or
'The shouts and roars of joy rose from the people.'
Personally I think it makes more sense to say 'the roars and shouts of joy'.

The spelling - treacherously

Nothing's wrong with the last one, other than that the female's name is probably 'Mary', not 'Marry'.
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