Present simple tense practice

[Huyen1]

I have just review PRESENT SIMPLE TENSE. I write a scetion as below. Can somebody help me to correct it?.

Lisa is a student. She study an accountant. She lives in Hochiminh city. She have a motorbike. She takes 30 minute from her house to school ?. She likes dance sport.
She spents a lot times & money for dance sport. She want to earn money by herself. But She can not work part time because she have a lot of a subject at her school.

She have a white skin & a bright eges. She is beautiful ladies. She have many boyfreinds. Finaly She agree to love a man who is very rich. He give money to Lisa every month. Now Lisa doesn't need to do anything.

[Beeesneees]

Lisa is a student. She is studying as an accountant. She lives in Hochiminh City. She has a motorbike. It takes her 30 minutes to travel from her house to school. She likes dance sport. She spends a lot of time and money on dance sport. She wants to earn money by herself, but she cannot work full time because she has a lot of subjects at school.

She has white skin and bright eyes. She is a beautiful lady. She has many boyfriends. Finally she agreed to love a man who is very rich. He gives money to Lisa every month. Now Lisa doesn't need to do anything.

Please ask if I've made changes you don't understand.
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[Huyen1]

Hi.

Thanks for your correct my sentence.

But I don't understand about sentence "She has white skin and bright eyes".

Why you didn't use article I thinks correct sentence is: She has a white skin and a bright eyes.

[Beeesneees]

Using an article would not be usual with skin there. You are describing her complexion and colouring. You make it sound as if she possesses a skin seoarate from her body.

Using an article is incorrect with 'bright eyes' because 'eyes' is plural.
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Cheers m' dears!

[Huyen1]

Thanks four your explain