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Child hood is the happiest time in the person life ( agree-disagree )?

Some people argue as if it is general truth that a child hood is the happiest time in the person life but to be frank, I can't agree with them. There are numerous r
easons why I hold no confident on them, and I would express only a few primary ones here.
The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant the basic fact that happiness is subjective. Every person has won definition for happens. Some people see it as being pure without thinking about any issue in life rather than playing. But for me I see happens through the responsibility and being in charge. I remember that while I was child I always hat when my parent didn't give me much to do because I know that I am older than I look .By the time I had the first responsibility I remember that I felt very good.
Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that putting a general judgment about something is far of fairness. Some people had the worst child hood for that we can't say that the child hood is the happiest time in the person life. We have to consider every person situation and respect it. I remember once I read book called a child called it. After I read this book I promise myself not to give a general judgment about anything.
General speaking child hood is one level of our life .we can't see it from one aspect. We should recognize the fact that happiness is subjective which dive us to be fairness to other people. So I hope all people see it from my point of view.

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between two students at their university cafeteria