 #1 (permalink) Mon May 16, 2011 12:45 pm Toefl Writing 1 |
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Q1 If I had enough money to purchase either a house or a business, I would choose to buy a business. There are two reasons: usefulness for society and chances to meet a large number of people.
If I had enough money to purchase either a house or a business, I would choose to buy a business. There are two reasons: usefulness for society and chances to meet a large number of people.
A business is useful for society. If I bought a restaurant and started to manage it, I would like to provide customers dishes made by organic food. My restaurant’s food would improve my customers’ health. If I bought a nursing house and started to run it, I would like to provide flexible services. For example if an elderly person’s family cannot take him to my nursing home, one of my employees pick him up to my nursing home. My nursing houses services would be helpful for elderly people and their families. On the contrary, if I bought a house, it would be used only by my family and my friends and it would help only them.
A business provides me a lot of chances to meet many people. If I bought a business, I would hire some peoples. I would see them every day and our relationship would be closer. If I bought a restaurant, everyday I would meet a person as a customer that I have ever seen. These meetings would stimulate my life. On the contrary, if I bought a house, I would not be able to have more relationship with people who I have ever met than if I bought a business.
A house is useful for only my family, but a business is useful for society. A house gives me limited relationships with others, but a business gives me unlimited relationships with others. Thus, I prefer to buy a business rather than a house.
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