Pls help me to correct my letter

Kelly · Wed Apr 05, 2006 12:17 pm *Pls help me to correct my letter*

Dear Tortens
I'm gonna have a trip to Singapore, hence I have to write a letter to inform my senior about the date and what I will do there. Pls do me a favour to correct it and can you also advise me the way to achieve success of these kind of correspondences?
Thanks for your generosity,
Herein is the information:

Dear Thandar
I wish to inform you that I am going to have a trip to Singapore in this month and I will be appearing in the office for about two days, 13 - 17 April. During the time staying there, would you please to take out some times to work with me on the Customer Profile? Yet, I have got some troubles with the Customer Transaction, hope that can check it out through this opportunity.
Thanks in advance for your time and generosity,
Sincerely yours,

Alan · Thu Apr 06, 2006 11:01 am *Letter*

Hi Kelly,

I have made some changes to your letter in capital letters:

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