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Hi Kelly,
I have made some changes to your letter in capital letters:
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Dear Thandar
I wish to inform you that (I am going to have) I AM TAKING a trip to Singapore (in) LATER this month and I will be (appearing in) VISITING the office for about two days, 13 - 17 April. During (the) MY time (staying) there, would you please (to take out some times) TAKE SOME TIME OUT to work with me on the Customer Profile? (Yet, I have got some troubles0 I AM STILL HAVING TROUBLE with the Customer Transaction AND hope that I can USE THIS OPPOORTUNITY TO check it out. (through this opportunity).
(Thanks) THANKING YOU in advance for your time and generosity,
(Sincerely yours)
YOURS SINCERELY, |
Please note that I suggest you leave out the words in brackets.
Alan
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