Please grade my essay - History and literature are more important than mathematic

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Dear all,
Please grade my essay.
thank you so much in advance.

TOPIC : History and literature are more important than mathematics and science. what do you think and why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

History and science are both plays important role in people’s life. History taught us many things by experiences. Science taught us information about different technologies. If I want to choose one, my preference should be history and literature.

To begin with, scientist from the today’s generation also prefers to go to past research history made by their ancestor so they will not make same mistake again. In short, history taught us good and bad experience which will definitely helps us to clear our way. I think without history and literature we can not able to reach success. For instance, to be a good doctor, scientist or engineer we need some background and knowledge which we can earn by history.

Secondly, I remembered in my engineering last year I did project about Genetic Routing and Placement engine. For this project I need information about the VLSI design. I did lot of research in VLSI topic. I read lot of history books and some past project. So, finally I completed my project successfully. This is because from past past experiences and research I can know which mistake will give me error. Finally, it’s bring me towords success of my project. So history always helps you in positive way.

Finally, I also agree with the statement that the science and mathematics are also play huge role in society. We also can use literature in science. For instance, many scientists save their records and experiences for future use for student but it should have to be in clean and understandable language so people can make use of that in future. Many books of mathematics and science are written in clean way so people can easily understand the language, and this is the use of literature in science.

In conclusion, history and literature are plays very crucial role in peoples life. History and literature always help to avoid our mistake from past experiences. We always learnt something new from history and literature.

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[Katty2010]

History and science are both plays AN important role in people’s life. History taught TEACHES us many things by experiences. Science taught TEACHES us information about different technologies. If I want to choose one, my preference should be history and literature.

To begin with, scientistS from the today’s generation also prefers to go to past research history made by their ancestor so they will not make same mistake again. In short, history tEACHESaught us good and bad experience which will definitely helps us to clear our way. I think without history and literature we can WILL not able to reach success. For instance, to be a good doctor, scientist or engineer we need some background and knowledge which we can Learn by history.

Secondly, I remembered in my engineering PROGRAM last year I did project about Genetic Routing and Placement engine. For this project I need information about the VLSI design. I did lot of research On VLSI topic. I read lot of history books and some past project. So, finally I completed my project successfully. This is because from past past experiences and research I can know which mistake will give me error. Finally, it’s bring BROUGHT me towords success of my project. So history always helps you in A positive way.

Finally, I also agree with the statement that the science and mathematics are also play huge role in society. We also can use literature in science. For instance, many scientists save their records and experiences for future use for studentS but it should have to be in clean and understandable language so people can make use of that in future. Many books of mathematics and science are written in clean way so people can easily understand the language, and this is the use of literature in science.

In conclusion, history and literature are plays very crucial role in people life. History and literature always help US to avoid our mistakeS from past experiences. We always learnt something new from history and literature.

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