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[Odehfreelancer]

i have write this letter to my boss , i need your help to check any mistakes or weakness :

Kindly note that inspectors had wrote penalty against our warehouse , since the warehouse license not existing , the inspectors threatened by closing the warehouse with red wax , on the other hand , its too difficult & not guarantee to get license for the warehouse & the caravan since the small area of the warehouse. I think we need to pay under the table to stay 1 year more in the warehouse waiting one of 2 choices : getting license or transfer to another location.
Finally , waiting your kind approval for under the table payment of $500

[Beeesneees]

Kindly note that the Inspectors issued a written penalty against our warehouse. As the warehouse license does not exist, the Inspectors threatened closure of the warehouse with red wax I don't understand this... possibly 'because we haven't sorted all the red tape', On the other hand, it is difficult to get a license for the warehouse and the caravan because of the small size of the warehouse area, so getting a licence is not guaranteed. I think we need to pay under the table to stay one more year in the warehouse, while/whilst arranging one of two options: getting a license or transferring to another location.
In the meantime, I await your kind approval for an under the table payment of $500.
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Cheers m' dears!

[Odehfreelancer]

thanks for your help

[Harila]

hello, i am writing a letter to my college principal
sir,
As i inform you that, we need some requirements to meet the needs of students. because i found that students are not satisfied which is we providing services, they feel inconvenience with limited seats where it is library. so many students are reading newspaper by standing only. so please take neccessary action in this regard.

[Frost_l]

Hi~ Harila

As I inform you of that we need some improvements to meet the needs of students. Because I found that students are not satisfied with the services we are providing, they feel inconvenient with the limited number of seats in the library. So many students can only stand while reading newspaper. So please take effective measures to solve this problem.

Maybe this is not the best.
But I hope it can help you.

[Salibali]

Harila,

I think you want to say that:

Dear sir,

As I informed you, we have some reqirements (or you can say " some requests") to meet students` needs, because, I found out, that students are not satisfied with the service we provide. They are put to inconvenience because of the limitied seats in our library. Many students read newspapers standing. Please, take much notice of the circumstance and work out the problem.

Yours sincerely!

I hope this will help you