[b]Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live perfor

[Merry ))]

Hello Katty2010. Please rate my new essay. Thanks a lot=)

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

With an invention of Internet, televisions, radios people can easily get an information about resent events all over the world. Also they are able to watch variety of concerts, sport events on TV instead of attending a live performance. In some ways it is even better, for people not always have a time, money and are reluctant to visit a live play, concert, etc. On the other hand, visiting a live performance can be more excited and enjoyable in place of watching it on TV or Internet. I'll describe here some reasons and examples in order to strengthen my point of view.

First reason is that these days youth and even some adults are living not " in life" but "online" attending different Internet sites and spending too much time watching TV. All this is not only unhealthy for us and in addition watching too much TV or Internet breaks a communication within the family. Wheres going to the concert or sport event makes people to move little, do some exercises and more likely meet friends.

Second, being at live performance, person can choose where to look, while watching it on TV he/she will see only what a camera sees. For example, you can look at the people and their expression at any moment.

Third, attending some a live event people generate more emotions and pleasure. Moreover people have a chance to be closer to their idols and favorite stars. In some cases they may take autographs of the renowned persons and take pictures with them.

To summarize, attending a live performance makes person a part of it and provides free observing of a show. Besides, there will be something to remember with friends and family, reviewing photos from different festivals, concerts, etc.

P.S. I hope this essay is written much better than previous one.

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[Waleed24]

Thank you so much Merry for your interesting essay.
I agree with you in all points.
also I think it's different for one to another depend on his/her situation,
there is someone have no time to attending it a live so he/she will watching it on TV or internet.

best regards

[Merry ))]

Tanks for your reading it. It is good to hear that my essay is interesting=)

[Merry ))]

Hello. Please someone check my essay=) Thanks...

[Katty2010]

With an invention of Internet, televisions, radios people can easily get an information about reCent events all over the world. Also they are able to watch variety of concerts, sport events on TV instead of attending a live performance. In some ways it is even better, for people WHO DO not always have a time, money and are reluctant to visit a live play, concert, etc. On the other hand, visiting a live performance can be more excitING and enjoyable in place of watching it on TV or Internet. I'll describe here some reasons and examples in order to strengthen my point of view.

First reason is that these days youth and even some adults are living not " in REAL WORLD" but "IN VIRTUAL WORLD" SURFING different Internet sites and spending too much time watching TV. All OF this is not only unhealthy for us and in addition watching too much TV or Internet breaks a communication within the family. Where As going to the concert or sport event makes people to move little, do some exercises and more likely meet friends.

SecondLY, being at live performance, person can choose where to look, while watching it on TV he/she will see only what a camera sees. For example, you can look at the people and their expression at any moment.

ThirdLY, attending some a live event people generate more emotions and pleasure. Moreover people have a chance to be closer to their idols and favorite stars. In some cases they may take autographs of the renowned persons and take pictures with them.

To summarize, attending a live performance makes person a part of it and provides free observing of a show. Besides, there will be something to remember with friends and family, reviewing photos from different festivals, concerts, etc.

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