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Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible bringing the children up. Agree or disagree?

Children are a miracle from god to marriage that helps parents become adults and gives great meaning to their lives and each family has been blessed with their arrival. Nutrition children are an harmonious combination of many factors which includes both father and mother.

Firstly, opponents claimed that no one can understand children as well as their mother neither teacher nor father. Fatherhood is earning as much money as possible to take care of their family, which is too busy to do another thing. Moreover, kids receive advices from mother easier than father who is very stubborn, inordinately tantrum and persistent just like them. A study shows that 75 percent of conversations between father and child are end in squabble. So, best way is that attending on children is responsibility of mothers.

Personally, in modern world where women are treated equally, they have job and even achieve a high position, their life are not only a mother, a wife but also is a collaborator, a person who have a definite position. Because of that hardly can they arrange their time for both two roles, especially in bringing their children up at the same time. From my experience, I have a friend who having three sons under ages of ten keeps Mai- my friend on her toes, and have a slim chance of going out and relaxing herself. I believed that many women wish that “how wonderful their husbands will be if they share these heavy responsibilities with them”. Furthermore, there are some fields women cannot explain as well as men, for example score, IT, discipline and some sexually problems. Facts have proved that in a period of transition for teenagers and there are many crucial milestones, kids who grow up without one in two, father or mother may not be developing at the same rate with their peers. They become extremely self-conscious, may be disoriented, depressed and rebel against their parents.

To conclude, I strongly belief that nowhere can children enjoy an all-around education than both father and mother’s hand.

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