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Hi, I will thankful to person who will point out my mistakes. Thanks in advance. #1 (permalink) Wed Jul 20, 2011 6:52 am   Hi, I will thankful to person who will point out my mistakes. Thanks in advance.
 

There is two categories of people, one are those who believe that watching the movies save the time as well as its near the reality as compare to the reading a story in the book. While other thing that reading a fiction book at home in bed or under your favorite three, can provide another feeling, which is impossible to amuse themselves by watching the same story at television screen or cinema. I personally prefer to read fiction book at home according to my taste and mood. I will discuss some of its aspects by providing the following points.

Novels and imagination books must have their place in everybody’s daily life. When someone is tired, or the brain is weary with serious study, it is a healthy recreation to lose ourselves in some absorbing story, written by master hand. After too many studies of the academic books, nothing could help me a lot in dispelling my fatigue than reading the fiction book or a novel and lost me in the world of imagination have a unique feeling .The story of fiction book will not only help to calm the brain but also giving the feeling of relaxation after long day work. Reading itself confers the countless blessing on its possessor, now in this matter reading fiction books give the highest kind of pleasure. Especially, for a student nothing could be a source of pleasure and amusement than reading faction book. Watching movies during reading the academic studies may out the full attention from studies and spread someone minds in other thing.

Movies are really noisy, in every second the commercial come betwixt the movie, which create disturbance, and some one can’t enjoy the movie’s story properly; going to the cinema is another problem. Most of the time someone disturbed by the noise of crowd or the person who sat next to you eating popcorn, someone can’t understand the theme of story. The movies are not available every time, at every place. While books can easily bring everywhere someone wants. To watch a movie someone have to set him/herself place, mood for it, whilst for book someone doesn’t have to bother themselves. Just purchase a book from market and bring the world of fantastic stories at your home.

Moreover, when someone watch the movie, he/she have to watch some other person’s perspective, like the director, actor, everybody in the movie, how the express it, they change the actual taste of the story which someone can feel from study it at book written by master hand.

At last, reading a fiction story at book providing unique feeling, when someone read a story at book, at same time you are directing a movie in your brain at your own style and taste, losing yourselves in the world of imagination, sitting in your favorite place provide the unique taste and it is much enjoyable as compare to watching a movie.

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Hi, I will thankful to person who will point out my mistakes. Thanks in advance. #2 (permalink) Wed Jul 20, 2011 13:53 pm   Hi, I will thankful to person who will point out my mistakes. Thanks in advance.
 

There ARE two categories of people, one are those who believe that watching the movies save the time as well as its near the reality as compareD to the reading a story in the book. While other thing that reading a fiction book at home in bed or under your favorite three, can provide another feeling, which is impossible to amuse themselves by watching the same story at television screen or cinema. I personally prefer to read fiction bookS at home according to my taste and mood. I will discuss some of its aspects by providing the following points.

Novels and imagination books must have their place in everybody’s daily life. When someone is tired, or the brain is weary with serious study, it is a healthy recreation to lose ourselves in some absorbing story, written by master hand. After too many studies of the academic books, nothing could help me a lot in dispelling my fatigue than reading the fiction book or a novel and losE mYSELF in the world of imagination. have a unique feeling .The story of fiction book will not only help to calm the brain but also givE the feeling of relaxation after long day'S work. Reading itself confers the countless blessing on its possessor, now in this matter reading fiction books give the highest kind of pleasure. Especially, for a student nothing could be a source of pleasure and amusement than reading A fIction book. Watching movies during STUDIES reading the academic studiesCAN DISTRACT YOUR [s]out the full[/s] attention from studies and DIVERT YOUR MIND TO FOCUS ON OTHER THINGS spread someone minds in other thing.

Movies are really noisy, AFTER every second A commercial comeS betWEEN the movie SCENES, which createS disturbance, and some one can’t enjoy the movie’s story properly.[FULLSTOP] Going to the cinema is another problem. Most of the time PEOPLE GET disturbed by the noise of crowd or the person who sITS next to you IS eating popcorn AND HENCE DISTURB. , someone can’t understand the theme of story. The movies are not available every time, at every place. While books can BE easily CARRIED ANYwhere someone wants. To watch a movie someone have to set him/herself place, mood for it, whilst for book someone doesn’t have to bother themselves. Just purchase a book from market and bring the world of fantastic stories at your home.

Moreover, when someone watchES the movie, he/she HAS to watch FROM some other person’s perspective, like the director, actor, everybody in the movie, how theY express THE STORY. it, MOSTLY they change the actual taste of the story which someone can feel from READING it at A book written by A master hand.

At last, reading a fiction story at book providES A unique feeling, when someone readS a story at book, at same time THAT PERSON IS you are IS directing a movie in your HIS/HER brain aCCORDING TO THEIR own style and taste, losing THEMselves in the world of imagination. HENCE READING A BOOK WHILE sitting in your favorite place provideS the unique EXPERIENCE and it is much enjoyable as compareD to watching a movie.

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