Finding errors

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Hello, thanks for viewing this post.

Please point out the errors in the following sentences for me:

The English spoken in England is slightly different from the one spoken in the U.S.

I go to school everyday by taking bus, as do most students that live in my city.

Thank you!

[Ozzy For President]

Is there a mistake?

"The English spoken..." sounds correct to me as you differenciate between the Englishes.

For that reason "the" is appropriate to my mind.

Regards,

Ozzy
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Claire London.

[W]

Well...my grammar book says they are incorrect = =

[Ozzy For President]

[W]

Well....my sweet sweet grammar book says that in the first sentence, "the one" is used incorrectly, as “English" is not a countable noun....

As in the second sentence, it says that "as do" should be replaced by "as with".... = =

[Ozzy For President]

Thank you for coming back on it,

Providing the information you do have helps others, who want to help you, focus on the exact problem. ; - )

I did not focus on the second sentence, though.

"I go to school everyday by taking bus," doesn't sound correct to me either.

Regards,

Ozzy
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I have learnt that "sorry" is not enough; sometimes you actually have to change.
Claire London.

[Beeesneees]

Naturally:
I go to school by bus every day, as do most students who live in my city.

Everyday (a 1 word phrase) means ordinary or commonplace.
Every day (a 2 word phrase) means daily.
The biggest mistake there is that you should have used 'every day'.
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Cheers m' dears!

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I do not understand grammar in this sentence below.

I go to school every day by taking bus, as do most students that live in my city.

I'd say

I go to school every day by taking a bus, as most students that live in my city do.

Thanks