describe photograoh

[Lara84]

hello please someone check it for me...

Describe your favorite photograph ?
1) Where was the photo taken?
2) Who took the photo?
3) What can be seen from the photo?
4) Explain why it is the favorite photograph for you.

*My favorite photograph was taken in the university XXX yard ,actually in the small garden in front of agricultural department at the evening about 5 years ago.i do not remember photographer's name ,in fact he worked at our university.Me and my all class mates can be seen from the photo we were wearied our traditional colorful dress and every body look happy some of them was standing and some other was sitting also the dean of our college with our teachers were sitting on chair.The reason why it is the favorite photograph for me that is my graduation photo every time look at this it brings back all memorizes and feeling that day.

[Mister Micawber]

My favorite photograph was taken on the XXX University campus, in a small garden in front of the Agriculture Department in the evening about five years ago.

I do not remember the photographer's name, but he worked at the university. All my classmates and I can be seen,wearing our colorful traditional dress, and everybody looks happy. Some are standing and others are sitting. The dean of our college and our teachers are sitting on chairs. It is my favorite photograph because it is my graduation photo, and every time I look at it, it brings back all the memories and feelings of that day.
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[Lara84]

thanks a lot mister micawber's ..

[Puppet]

Hi,
Can we say; He's been taking us? ( as an informal english).

[Beeesneees]

Not in the above paragraph, Puppet.
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[Puppet]

My question was out of this paragraph which Mr. Micawber corrected, Beee.

[Beeesneees]

I realise that, Puppet. You cannot use 'he''s been taking us' in that paragraph, even informally.
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