Technological innovation

[Ahmadi2010]

Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important . Give specific reasons for your choice.

Nowadays we live in the modern world. Fortunately there are many kinds of state of the art facilities which make us easy life. I think that one of the most important ways to communicate between nations is the computer and the internet. There are so many advantageous that make internet a unique device in modern communications. I will mention some reasons to support my idea.
First of all I think that the internet is the cheapest communication tool all around the world. It is cheaper than telephone and video call, but interestingly you can have both video and voice while you are using internet communication tools. There is also less traffic in the internet in comparison with telephone lines. With the internet you can communicate your friends and also find new friends all around the world. You can ask your foreign friends to talk about their culture, religious service and ancient places in their country. In my idea while using the internet you have unlimited time to speak and communicate with your friends in comparison to take travel that you will have limited time and also you have to expend much money.In addition,via internet you can mail your official letters instead of sending them by post.
The second reason is that while using the internet you can have more fun because it depends on you where you want to go mutually. You could go to mutual vacation where you want with devices such as Google and besides, you can enjoy being with your friends in chat clubs . Internet communications do not seem time –consuming in my idea because you do not have spend much time on buying tickets, sitting in air plane and sometime carry heavy tools. There are also some problems in transportation vehicles such as bad weather condition, delay and also less comfort. However you do not have to be in these positions and you can feel more peace and quiet while using the internet.
Finally I come to the conclusion that in my idea internet tools such as video calls, chat clubs and also surfing engines are important technological innovation in nation interactions. You can see from this that, you may have cheap and easy way to communicate with each other and do your official works all around the world.

(will someone help me :) to correct this writing? )

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between two students (1)

[Frenzyduonga]

[quote="Ahmadi2010"]Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important . Give specific reasons for your choice.

Nowadays we live in the modern world. Fortunately, there are many kinds of state of the art facilities which make us easy life. I think that one of the most important ways to communicate between nations is the computer and the internet. There are so many advantageous that make internet a unique device in modern communications. I will mention some reasons to support my idea.
First of all I think that the internet is the cheapest communication tool all around the world. It is cheaper than telephone and video call, but interestingly you can have both video and voice while you are using internet communication tools. There is also less traffic in the internet in comparison with telephone lines. With the internet you can communicate ..........with.........your friends and also find new friends all around the world. You can ask your foreign friends to talk about their culture, religious service and ancient places in their country. In my <idea>??? not good? while using the internet you have unlimited time to speak and communicate with your friends in comparison to that compared to take travel that you will have limited time and also you have to expend spend much money.In addition,via internet you can mail your official letters instead of sending them by post.

[Ahmadi2010]

thanks dear Frenzyduonga :)