Pets should be treated like a family members. Do you agree or disagree with this

[Kiks]

Pets should be treated like a family members. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.

I strongly agree that pets should be treated like a family member because they lived in our homes most of the time, and they can interact with us like a family members do. Most children love to have pets at home. Sometimes, even you won't tell what to do with the pets, they know what the animals need. By feeding, walking and grooming a dog. Children learn to be independent by themselves in doing this. For many children a dog or kitten is also a best friend because whenever their parents are not around, they could play with the pets and even talking to them like a normal human being.

Even a couple who are unable to have kids, they adapt pets and treat them like their own babies. They showered with love and spend pennies for the needs of their pets just to pamper them. There are few people who like more to have pets rather than to have someone in their life who can easily leave or hurt them if there's no love anymore. Pets won't give you pressures and problems, even you leave them somewhere, they will keep coming back to your place.

They are also valuable to us, for instance if you are unable to take something, they can be a helping hand if they are trained. Pets could provide services such as bringing objects to the owners. In addition to that, pets also have an extra sensory perception. A pet can feel if there is something will happen in the environment. They could also give sign to the owners by barking if there's a stranger outside your home.

In real sense, pets are caring for their owners like family members do and for this reason they should deserve the same kind of treatment that a family member would received.

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[Katty2010]

I strongly agree that pets should be treated like a family memberS because they lived in our homes most of the time, and they can SOMEHOW interact with us like a family members do. Most children love to have pets at home. Sometimes, [s]even you won't tell what to do with the pets[/s], they know what the animals need. By feeding, walking and grooming a dog, children learn to be independent by themselves in doing this. For many children a dog or kitten is also a best friend because whenever their parents are not around, they cAN play with the pets and even talking to them like a normal human being.

Even a couple who are unable to have kids, they adapt pets and treat them like their own babies. They showered THEM with love and spend pennies for the needs of their pets just to pamper them. There are few people who like more to have pets rather than to have someone in their life who can easily leave or hurt them if there's no love anymore. Pets won't give you pressures and problems, even IF you leave them somewhere, they will keep coming back to your place.

They are also valuable to us, for instance if you are unable to take something, they can be a helping hand if they are trained. Pets could provide services such as bringing objects to the owners. In addition to that, pets also have an extra sensory perception. A pet can feel if there is something WRONG will happen in the environment. They cAN also give sign to the owners by barking if there's a stranger outside your home.

In real sense, pets are CARE for their owners like family members do and for this reason they should deserve the same kind of treatment that a family member would received.

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[Kiks]

OK, thanks for correcting me and for your suggestion.