letter of application

[Solan]

Hello teachers
May you read this application letter and correct it's mistakes.

Dear sir/ Madam,

I would like to apply for the position of lifeguard which I saw advertised in the student newspaper.
At present I am learning English; I can speak English fluently and contact with foreign people. I regret I have had no experience of this kind of work; but I am a good swimmer. every year I spend my summer on swimming in Caspian lake. Also I took first aid course two months ago and passed it with Grade A.
I feel I would be suitable for the job because I am good at swimming, first aid and I enjoy working with people. The job would give me the opportunity to have great experience which will be useful for all my life.
I would appreciate being given opportunity to attend an interview and would be very grateful if you would consider my application.

yours faithfully,

[Beeesneees]

Dear Sir,

I would like to apply for the position of lifeguard which I saw advertised in the student newspaper.
At present I am learning English and have reached a standard whereby I can speak English fluently. I regret I have had no experience of this kind of work, but I am a good swimmer. Every year I spend my summer swimming in Lake Caspian.
Two months ago, I took a first aid course and achieved an A grade.
I feel I would be suitable for the job because I am good at swimming and first aid and I enjoy working with people. The job would give me the opportunity to have a very useful life experience.
I would appreciate being given the opportunity to attend an interview and would be very grateful if you would consider my application.

Yours faithfully,
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Cheers m' dears!

[Solan]

I appreciate it, Beeesneees :)