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[Mreborn]

Independent topic: learn by reading or learn by doing

People learn every day. Some people learn by reading, others learn by doing things. I prefer the later because such reasons as first-hand experience, clear understanding and fun in taking part in the activity.
The first reason is that we will have first-hand experience. When we unsuccessful at first or make mistake we will get experience of learning something. For example, children nowadays play computer games without teaching and guiding from adult. They explore by themselves and learn the ways to play.
The second reason is that we can clear understanding. People will get experience after they explore by themselves and surely understanding the problems well. For instance, if we make coffee by follow book, sometime it’s not good taste. Because everyone has different tastes and the receipt is written in the book is taste for only the authors so it’s not tasty for everybody. Do it by ourselves we will know our tastes so that we can add some more sugar, for example, we will make it good for us when we know exactly how many spoons of coffee and sugar can be better to us.
The third reason is that we will have fun in taking part in the activity. By doing by ourselves people can be more active, excited, interested than reading a book silently and that will make we feel happy. For example, if we learn how to play balls, we can play footballs with friends that lead to a consequence we will feel more relaxed and funny than reading the theory in a book.
In conclusion, I think that doing things is the best way to learn things. I suggest that if we are in case of not able to learn by doing, we should learn by reading to widened knowledge and when we have chance we could learn more by doing.

TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture from an american literature class

[Katty2010]

Independent topic: learn by reading or learn by doing

People learn every day. Some people learn by reading, others learn by doing things. I prefer the later because such reasons as first-hand experience, clear understanding and fun in taking part in the activity.

The first reason is that we will have first-hand experience. When we ARE unsuccessful at first or make mistake we will get experience of learning something. For example, children nowadays play computer games without teaching and guiding from adult. They explore by themselves and learn the ways to play.

The second reason is that we can ATTAIN clear understanding. People will get experience after they explore by themselves and surely BY understanding the problems well. For instance, if we make coffee by followING RECIPE IN book, sometime it DOES NOT not good taste GOOD. Because everyone has different tastes and the reciepe is written in the book is ACCORDING TO taste for only the OF author's so it’s not tasty for everybody. Do it by ourselves we will know our tastes so that we can add some more sugar, for example, we will make it good for us when we know exactly how many spoons of coffee and sugar can be better FOR us.

The third reason is that we will have fun BY taking part in the activity. By doing THINGS by THEMselves people can be more active, excited, interested than reading a book silently and that will make we feel happy. TAKING PART IN AN ACTIVITY MAKES A PERSON FEEL HAPPY. For example, if we learn how to play balls, we can play footballs with friends that lead to a consequence wHERe WE will feel more relaxed and funny than reading the theory in a book.

In conclusion, I think that doing things is the best way to learn things. I suggest that if we are in case of not able to learn by doing, we should learn by reading to widened knowledge and when we have chance we could learn more by doing.


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[Htsondk251]

People learn every day. Some people learn by reading, others learn by doing things. I prefer the later LATTER because such reasons as first-hand experience, clear understandingS and fun in taking part in the activity.

The first reason is that we will have first-hand experience. When IF we ARE (or THOUGH WE MAY BE) unsuccessful at first or make mistake we will get experience of FROM learning something. For example, children nowadays play computer games without teaching and guiding from adult. They explore by themselves and learn the ways to play.

The second reason is that we can ATTAIN clear understandingS. People will get experience after they explore by themselves and surely (???) BY understanding the problems well. For instance, if we make coffee by followING RECIPE IN book, sometime it DOES NOT good taste GOOD. Because everyone has different tastes and the receipt is written in the book is WRITTEN ACCORDING TO taste for only the OF authors so it’s not tasty for everybody. Do MAKE it by ourselves we will know our tastes so that we can add some more sugar, for example, we will make it good for us when we know exactly how many spoons of coffee and sugar can be THAT IS better FOR us.

The third reason is that we will have fun BY taking part in the activity. By doing THINGS by THEMselves people can be more active, excited, interested than reading a book silently and that will make we feel happy. For example, if we learn how to play balls, we can play footballs with friends that lead to a consequence WHERE WE will feel more relaxed and funny than reading the theory in a book.

In conclusion, I think that doing things is the best way to learn things. I suggest that if we are in case of not able to learn by doing, we should learn by reading to widened knowledge and when BUT IF we have chance (it’s possible) we could can learn more by doing.

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