What famous place would you like to visit? Use details and reasons to support you

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What famous place would you like to visit? Use details and reasons to support your response

In the twenty first century people can easily travel places where they want. There are a lot off worth visiting places in the world and all of them have specific advantages. The place which I was most like to visit is Rio de Janeiro, the second big city of Brasil. There are some reasons which convince me to visit Rio.
First reason is Samba carnivals. Samba carnival is one of the biggest carnivals in the world. To this carnival which are organized every year, take part hundreds of thousands tourists from different countries. Dancing in national clothes of brasil, person gets great delight. Visiting to Rio, I can enjoy participating to in this carnival and the same time I can meet a lot of people from diverse places. As a result, it can be new experience in my life.
Second reason for which I wanted to visit Rio is ocean. According to the information which I obtained, the seaside of the Rio de Janeiro is the most beautiful beach.. Rio situates in the coast of the ocean and this gives additional beauty to the city. Wonderful scenery, clear ocean water and different latin people can make our rest unreplaceable. Also, visiting the seaside of the Rio, I can practice surfing which there is not in our country and can be novelty for me.
Final reason is visiting Maracana stadium. This stadium is the biggest stadium at the world. Moreover, the historical and very important football games have been played there. Every football match which are playing there, has great atmosphere. Visiting this stadium, participate in these matches as a spectator, I can be one part of all of this. There is nothing more satisfying than to see the great football players in the stadium of Maracana.
In conclusion, to take part in the carnival, swimming in the ocean and to be in the stadium, can make my trip unforgettable. This experiences which I can receive there, can stay as a sweet memories in my life.

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