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is there any problem with this? #1 (permalink) Thu Sep 08, 2011 7:35 am   is there any problem with this?
 

Hi to all,
I wanted to know if there is any problem with this paragraph.

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Weather is one of the most important factors for a habitat, so many people immigrate to live where its weather is suitable for them. As I am sensitive to weather, I do not like variable climate, but also I prefer to live somewhere with constant weather which I enjoy that.


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is there any problem with this? #2 (permalink) Thu Sep 08, 2011 8:47 am   is there any problem with this?
 

Weather is one of the most important factors in many people's lives, so they move to where the weather suits them. As I am sensitive to weather, I do not like a variable climate.
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is there any problem with this? #3 (permalink) Thu Sep 08, 2011 9:22 am   is there any problem with this?
 

Great thanks Mister Micawber,

anyway is it possible to use habitat in the first sentence? is the immigrate wrong there?
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is there any problem with this? #4 (permalink) Thu Sep 08, 2011 11:00 am   is there any problem with this?
 

They are both wrong if you are talking about people like you and me moving to nice places to live. 'Habitat' is a word used in the biological science of ecology, the study of plants & animals in relation to their environment; 'immigration' is used in the study of mass movements of people for political, economic and other social reasons.
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is there any problem with this? #5 (permalink) Thu Sep 08, 2011 12:04 pm   is there any problem with this?
 

ow I've thought about that but I wasn't sure,
I appreciate your time Mister Micawber.
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