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[Medicinka]

Please help me check my homework. It should be a free translation, but i dont know do it better. I don't think this is good free translation... so please help :D

My friend and her spouse had dinner in well-known restaurant. During 'the lunch, they noticed older woman, who was sitting alone by next table and constantly looking on them. They kindly smiled on her, but they didn't do it, because old woman came to their table. I'm sorry to trouble you, but you remind me of my daughter. She died of cancer last year and she miss me so much. So i was asking myself, if you will be able to do for me a favour. They given a nod a she continued. I'll be please, if you told me "Goodbye mum" and waved me, when i would to go. How we won't sa not to that? After few minutes, when old lady stood up from the table and pick up her things, they waved cheerfully, when "mother" living restaurant. They had a good feeling, that he did good deed and they asked waiter for a bill. They were shocked, when they saw a sum. So they called a chief and give explaned it. It is with old lady lunch. She said, that daughter will pay for it.

[Tamta]

Hi Medicinka, I'll try to check it and then maybe others might check it too:)

My friend and her spouse had dinner in a well-known restaurant. During 'the lunch, they noticed an old woman, who was sitting alone at the next table and constantly looking at them. They kindly smiled at her, but she didn't do it, because the old woman came to their table. "I'm sorry to trouble you, but you remind me of my daughter. She died of cancer last year and I miss her so much. So I was asking myself, if you would be able to do for("for" is redundant here) me a favour. They gave a nod and she continued. I'll be pleased, if you tell me "Goodbye mum" and waved ("d" is redundant) me, when I go. How we won't sa not to that? (I couldn't understand this sentence, maybe it is " how wouldn't we do it?!") After few minutes, when the old lady stood up from the table and picked up her things, they waved cheerfully, while "mother" was leaving the restaurant. They had a good feeling, because they did good deed and they asked the waiter for a bill. They were shocked, when they saw a sum. So they called a chief and he gave them such explanation: "It is with the old lady's lunch. She said, that daughter would pay for it.

P.S. Oh, this old woman has been so cunning:) Nice story!
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