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Why go to university

Going to study in university is being a tendency for most of graduates from high school because it is not only a sign for one’s great achievement in high school, and only a bridge to a broader future as we can receive more challenges.

First let us look at a person can typically gain from a successfully study at a university. It is the diploma and a degree. This is one most important advantage for a person especially for women to search for a job in society even in rich country. Companies always want some well educated person so that they can spend less time and money for extra educate before they work in the company. Another advantage college educators have is their rich experience in college students union make them skilled in communicate so that they can adapt the complex relationships with their company or even in different agents.

However, college can also give more opportunities to find their real interests for the broad majors and various programs under different professors. It is not only a garden to get further acknowledge, and also a chance to join the program with experienced professors and partners with same interests.

Last but not the least benefit from college is that it is so open that it can give students many times to forgive their wrongs and retry again as they are young and still students in school. However, for others who worked directly after high school or even had not ever studied, even they have the same age, are not permitted to do wrong at work because they are viewed as a adult.

Finally I cannot oversee the fact that there are still many successors without any college experience in society. What need to say is that we cannot forget their twice, thirds or even more times study and work than college students before they get succeed.

For one word, college is a place to provide more opportunities to study and work, and is also a place to get experiences before work. It is a nearest way for persons’ future.

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Going to study in A university is being a tendency for most of graduates from high school. Because it is not only a sign for one’s great achievement in high school, BUT ALSO only a bridge to a BRIGHT future as we can receive more challenges.

FirstLY, let us look at A person cOULD typically gain A diploma and a degree from a successfully study at a university. This is THE most important advantage for a person especially for women WANT to search for a job in society even in rich country.(WHY?WHY WOMEN?) Companies always want some well-educated person so that they can spend less time and money for extra educatION before they WOULD work in the companIES. Another advantage college EDUCATION is THAT their rich experience in college students union make them skilled in communicatION SKILL, WHICH so that they can adapt TO the complex relationships with their company or even in different agents.

However, college cOULD also give more opportunities to find STUDENTS' real interests for the broad majors and various programs under different professors. (???)It is not only a PLACE to get further acknowledge, and also a chance to join the programS with experienced professors and partners HAVING THE same interests.

Last but not the least， benefitS from college is that it is so open that it can give students many times to forgive their wrongs and retry(?) again as they are young and still ARE students in THE school. However, for others who WOULD worked directly after high school or even had not ever studied, even they have the same age, are not permitted to do wrong at work because they are viewed as a adultS.

Finally, I cannot oversee the fact that there are still many successors without any college experience in THE society. What need to say is that we cannot forget their twice, thirds or even more times FAILURE than college students before they gOt succeed.

IN one word, college is a place to provide more opportunities to study and work, and is also a place to get experiences before work. It is THE nearest way for persons’ future.