 #1 (permalink) Mon Sep 12, 2011 15:29 pm some CAE essays |
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Hi!
I'm preparing to CAE exam. I am writing a lot of essays now, but honestly I can't be always sure, if they're correct. Each essay should be about 250 words. Because it is CAE exam, I am interested only in British English.
I would appreciate every mistake you could point me out.
First:
letter of application,
giving full details of your education and interests,
including the subject you wish to pursue,
explaining why you would be a suitable recipient of the grant.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I have read your advertisement in the newspaper and I am interested in your offer. I am studying Spanish culture at Dirtham University for three years and I am very proud of it. This kind of studies are giving me satisfaction, so I would like to fathom this topic.
I have already been in Spain two years ago. I consider Spanish culture very interesting. It is a reason why I have chosen my specialization: Spanish culture in modern times. This is also the topic, that my report would have. It would contain information about education of Spanish youth. I am also interested in spoken, informal language. Besides I could participate in some national events and talk to people who know them backwards. This kind of source is the best. Living amongst people every day would give me more materials, than I need to prepare this report.
I always liked to learn new languages. My adventure with Spanish started when I was ten, so I know this language very well. First salary I had earned, I spent on holiday in Spain. When I was there, I have met some new friends. They could help me now gathering materials for the report. Besides, this kind of personal and direct meeting with the culture would give me very valuable experience for my studies at Dirtham University. I would be very happy if I could take part in your offer.
Yours faithfully,
Luke. |
As I said, I am writing a lot now, so I will post next essay in short time.
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