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Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Justly the topic said, some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants, others prefer to prepare and eat food at home, because people have different hobbies to take each meal. Sometimes, people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants by the convenience, save the time to spend the preparation in each meal.

In my opinion, I prefer to prepare and eat food at home. First important reason is because I am oriental vegetarian, but Guatemalan vegetarian consume onions and garlic; it is more difficultly and expensive to find something delicious not include onion and garlic on the food in Guatemala. So it is easier preparing food at home. For example, my mother is like a professional chef that she teaches me all things about the vegetarian culinary. I learned how to prepare a fresh, delicious and healthy food. Instead, the food stands or restaurants could not be a healthier and cleaner than foods prepare at home.

Another example I can give is the event in Taiwan. That case is about the poisonous food condiments. People should not confirm that they consume the food with poisonous condiments, so that had increased the panic to eat at food stands or restaurants.

Although I prefer to eat food at home, but sometimes when I have celebrations or parties with my friends, I ought to eat something that does not so fresh or cleaner for me. Or not so oriental vegetarian that include onions or garlic, it is so uncomfortable because it makes me feel bad and stomachache at next day.

My conclusion is try always that I can to eat at home and prevent this uncomfortable event.

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