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What kind of influences can media affect

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1)Nowadays, mass medias, such as tv,internet and movies have became

essential sources of contemporary people of modern society. It is even safe to claim

that over 50% of one's behaviour is influenced by these easily acessible mass

medias. Thus, sorting out positive and negative influences and understanding

consequences from interacting with mass media is necessary for all ages.

2)To live in this daily competing life, people are devoted to obtain

iunformations and such informations can easily be acquired from medias, such as

newspaper, internet and tv newses. Obtained informations provide people,

adjustments for their proceeds to next behaviours. Likewise, people can prepare for

any upcoming unprecedented events in one's life by collecting informaitons from

watching particular tv program or searching desired subject through internet. For an

example, if one wants to save his/her time by finding short route to a particular area

before departure, the one can find the regarding information by searching through

Google map, which consumes about 5minutes. Briefly described as using 5 minutes

to save several hours by the power of media.

3) Contrary to positive influences of mass media, which stated above, medias

can also affect people' behaviours in negative ways. Not only mature, grown-ups

make numerous contacts with the medias, younger ones, ages between 5 ~ 19, can

also easily be interacted with it anytime. Unlike fully matured adult, youngsters'

fledgling brains are incapable of adapting newly obtained informations in a way it

should be accepted. If a younger one, age under 10, watchs violent or sexual films

without preserving proper educations regarding these matters, it can cause serious

problems to their perspectives and result in breeding out traumas or mental problems,

which will be prolonged to remain within their mind for a life time.

4)Furthurmore, unstable and half grown brains of youngsters accept things

the way they actually see. In other words, they tend to imitate what they see from

older people without perceiving sense of right or wrong, consequences of what they

are imitating and the influence, which will even lead them to fall into the bottomless

pit. It is parents' crucial responsibility to guide away these innocent youngsters from

harmful sources of media, which already dispersed all over the world in reachable

distance for children.

5) To sum up all, mass media can be described as a double edged knife,

bearing fruits of sweet and poisoned at the same time. Tough the media contains

tremendous informations and resources of our needs, if one abuses its power, the

perilous outcome will eventually head back to us in various ways. It is firmly belived

that as senior living members of the world, we must prevent these outcomes at all

cost and also be decent models as fine adults.

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